Chapter 16 Scene-By-Scene preview finally updated.
Added 2015-10-26 03:26:56 +0000 UTCUgh, I know it's been forever. Just… for the longest time, nothing I wrote for the middle of this chapter worked for me. I think I've got it now, but please let me know if it still seem off.
Comments
Looking good to me! i like the bit of introspection from Celestia regarding her perceived lack of influence over the progress of her nation.
Nilaru
2015-10-29 04:15:53 +0000 UTC
