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Chapter 16 Scene-By-Scene preview finally updated.

Ugh, I know it's been forever.  Just… for the longest time, nothing I wrote for the middle of this chapter worked for me.  I think I've got it now, but please let me know if it still seem off.

Chapter 16 Scene-By-Scene preview finally updated.

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Looking good to me! i like the bit of introspection from Celestia regarding her perceived lack of influence over the progress of her nation.

Nilaru


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