Chapter 55 and 56. First Day
Added 2025-03-05 19:45:25 +0000 UTCHaah...haah...
Adom stood in his fighting
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Adom likely bought it for her as a part of the necessary equipment shed need
James Casteel
2025-04-02 03:28:07 +0000 UTC"I don't want to know how much that bag cost," Sam muttered. "No," Cassandra agreed, closing it. "You really don't." It is illogical that Cassandra has the money to buy such a thing or not sell it, considering the job she was working.
Storyflower
2025-03-21 21:18:57 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Muhammad A
2025-03-09 19:57:31 +0000 UTCOw man, that brings back memories. My father used to read us The Farseer Trilogy when we were kids, this definitely played a role in me writing today
Ace_the_owl
2025-03-06 11:37:50 +0000 UTCThank you so much Bapp!
Ace_the_owl
2025-03-06 11:34:56 +0000 UTCIt's the best combo lol, also, I knew someone would get the ref!
Ace_the_owl
2025-03-06 11:34:14 +0000 UTCThanks for reading!
Ace_the_owl
2025-03-06 11:33:27 +0000 UTCThank you so much!
Ace_the_owl
2025-03-06 11:33:19 +0000 UTCOh right! That'll be addressed in the coming chapters, it's also a plot point I'd like to expand upon.
Ace_the_owl
2025-03-06 11:33:07 +0000 UTCCooking and food in writing is often one of the most immersing things you can do, Robin Hobb's description of pies is honestly the reason I read today.
Dylan King
2025-03-06 02:05:53 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. I just remembered but did Adom ever warn someone about the mind control spider in the B rank dungeon he was in?
TheOne320
2025-03-05 23:37:30 +0000 UTCI liked the chapter, loooking forward to the next. I enjoyed the forest mimic scene.
Jeffrey Marcus
2025-03-05 20:55:19 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter!
Fabian
2025-03-05 20:13:19 +0000 UTCWhere the points don't matter, laughed at that random hat reference. Also Dulce de leche is great with arroz con leche
Will Iam
2025-03-05 20:08:10 +0000 UTCI really liked this chapter. It felt very refreshing because we got a variety of scenes, fighting, cooking, and now another conflict that leaves me wanting more.
Bapp
2025-03-05 20:00:54 +0000 UTCI had a lot of fun writing the cooking scene. Hope this was enjoyable to read. It was basically their version of beef bourgignon (is that how you say it?), and rice pudding with Dulce de Leche on top. And the red slime acts as a thickener, and MSG in the dish. I had something similar a few days ago, so it was easier to immerse myself in the story and write the scene. I'll do that that more often for more authentic writing I think. Not the dungeon diving, of course, but the cooking and other non life threatening stuff are right up my alley, lol. Next chapter coming tomorrow!
Ace_the_owl
2025-03-05 19:50:13 +0000 UTC
