XaiJu
Circle Games
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Release Chapter Rework

Hello guys, I've decided to take some time to rework my very first release. There were two main reasons for me to do this, both are important in my opinon. First, the art...Vi looks a little too young in the original and that's obvisously a problem for me. Second, the story...I re-wrote some parts of the chapter to give more information about the school situation and Laura's job and other charachters. This allows me to set up future scenarios in future chapters. Some images and dialogues are the same, not because they're perfect but because I didn't want to waste a lot of time on this. After Anya's POV I might rework some other stuff as well. Depends on the mood xD

First previews of Anya's DLC are comming up very soon as I'm working on it right now. Stay tunned :)

PC

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1826m2aAM37HF1rlh7Bbui36zPcJsuYvC/view?usp=sharing

https://mxdrop.to/f/jdjmlnkos76on9q

MAC

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1d5Rp8nwZ4FO49H-Ts0K700ZcNo39YT5E/view?usp=sharing

https://mxdrop.to/f/dkjlnzrpu3rg04

Release Chapter Rework

Comments

I think the original character looked fine, and no young girl is as developed as that, but it's your vision, make it the way you see it.

damnedcomic

Care less about the face rework, but the oversized breasts get kind of tedious after a while. Part of the reason I like this game is because at least some of the girls have more realistic proportions

JS

Tks for your view. The problem: the animators are doing what the majority of the people fancy. And I do not have to tell you, that when watching a reality show on TV, the amount of people who have not changed their lips, faces, eyes or other parts of the body are below 25%....

Newbe163

i disagree on that point, the first version makes her seems underage, which is why i think this rebrand is a good thing

ulysse

I just commented the same thing. Animators and cartoon drawers tend to make oversized body parts for some reason. My personal opinion is similar to yours, the first drawing had better more realistic body sizes

Coolio Rabbit

More realistic face, less realistic body.. is it a thing where people love over sized tits and ass ? Like un realistic cartoonish sizes ?

Coolio Rabbit

Tks for the info, that this is only an alignment of Chapter 1 to the settings done later. Was just comparing the first 30 pages on both versions. So let's see the whole new version completely. Then I give my final feed-back to the new update.

Newbe163

Since you're re-vamping things... and this can just be a "moving forward" type of thing. I would suggest diversifying/varying up more of your Male characters. The Girls looks great, but the males are blending in and feels "samey" to me. (And i get that in some cases BG characters/Incidentals does not have to be a "unique snowflake") What i mean by "samey" is they kinda have similar personalities/approach, similar sets of expressions, similar body type and "Size". Could be more dynamic and opens up a lot more opportunities to explore the story/plotline if you play with different archetypes - experiment with Male characters with different height, age groups, demeanor, posture, speech pattern, etc anyway...that's my two cents. Creative decisions are up to you of course :) Keep up the good work. Thanks

Uwanova

I disagree, I think the new version is more on par with her naked breasts, but I respect your opinion friend :) Sorry to disapoint

Circle Games

It makes their size consistent with how they have been since literally like chapter 2. Only in chapter 0 and chapter 1 were they smaller (and in some chapter 1 renders even they were large like now). Sort of a weird complaint when it's been this way for over 6 months of development now.

Symbiotic Life

Nah dat side booba action is chefs kiss bro

Zytoxx

woohoow! Another reason to replay the game 😁

azula aang

Sorry to say, but you are overdoing it with the size of the breast of Vi. The change in the face is okay to give her a more adult expression, but the way of her body in the old version was much more realistic than the new one. Just my view.

Newbe163

Thanks so much for the quick response. If you need help you can reach out to cebs I know he ports TACOS. Love your game

J Baron

Yes, I'm working on it ASAP, you will hear news for that soon!

Circle Games

Hey I’m a new supporter. Have you ever thought of offering an android version? It may help increase your supporters.

J Baron


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