I made a few small dialogue changes to strips 301 and 302 if you'd like to check them out.
When I originally wrote this and the other previous two strips, it started with Felix suggesting yogurt and jam as the filling first, Jess saying no, the pair of them exhausting all the other options, and then going back to yogurt and jam. It felt messy, so I changed it.
And then decided to add a little hint about Jess' background while I was at it.
Bruxius
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