Being Fiona 248
Added 2024-09-26 01:15:47 +0000 UTC(Edit: Changed Jess' dialogue in the last panel, she had said the same thing in strip 246).
So how obvious is it that in the second panel Felix is seeing both the real world and the vr world overlaying it at the same time? (He has his real and virtual eyes open both at once).
I had considered having Jess mention how weird it feels to do that, but it bogged things down, so I skipped that explanation.
Comments
Such a Web of lies, Fiona really should have just said they weren't dating it was just a line used to avoid guys hitting on her when she just wants to play the game.
Senko
2024-09-28 21:45:30 +0000 UTCI did think that the wide angle vuew made the one hand look large, and that made sense. The front leg, the bottom with the sock, looks a bit unnatural to me, - I think part of it is supposed to be his foot, but it seems just one thing to me. Minor detail. I love the the comic
stevedore
2024-09-26 15:57:06 +0000 UTCIt could also be the baggy pants model I used for reference.
From the Files of Robin Harper
2024-09-26 11:19:32 +0000 UTCPanel 2 is very nice and well done. A successful example of "show, don't tell".
Disbet
2024-09-26 05:26:41 +0000 UTCMaybe caused by a wide-angle camera lens taking a picture so close to is subject. I liked it.
Disbet
2024-09-26 05:25:45 +0000 UTCIs it just me or do Felix's legs look odd in that first panel?
stevedore
2024-09-26 04:05:28 +0000 UTCPretty obvious and well done
V-ger
2024-09-26 01:48:20 +0000 UTCPanel 1 reminds me of a joke from the movie Serenity: Wash: She can read minds? That sounds like something from science fiction. Zoe: Dear, you live in a spaceship... Wash: Yeah, so?
Bruxius
2024-09-26 01:22:28 +0000 UTC
