Heart Guardians Part 16 - Panels 207-228
Added 2024-09-06 03:00:05 +0000 UTCAnd so after almost 2000 panels and 21 real-world months later, the flashback ends!
Out of curiosity, how clear was it that the speech bubbles in the second last panel were Scott's? I'm wondering if I should adjust it so that it's more clear that it was Scott replying to Cassie.
Comments
That took a lot out of you
Patrick Hunt
2024-09-06 20:49:33 +0000 UTCSpeech bubble was clear - but I was wondering about last page: did 'heavily sensored' refer to Scott's question or Cassie's answer 😜 (that was sensored)
punarotta
2024-09-06 12:10:33 +0000 UTCWas Anna's ex "fucking" with her when he sold that Berries plant to Toby? ...I'd guess depends on if Rob(in) has any special connection/role with Anna... Also, since Toby did not recognize Gildamore, he's Mary's dad? (and they are talking about her here)
punarotta
2024-09-06 11:57:02 +0000 UTCIm curious if scott is actually maybe not now the second powerfull heart guardian in a generation. As for scott speaks bubble I had no problem with it.
Timo Hekker
2024-09-06 07:08:52 +0000 UTCAnna's "Mistake" huh? Poor little puppets, not realizing they're on strings.
Thatguywithaname
2024-09-06 05:35:06 +0000 UTCSeemed like Scott talking to me, it's more than horns he's got left over. That is a good question even without Anna's gift you'd think Cassie would introduce Scarlett to her family at some point even if only in reassurance she's starting to heal.
Senko
2024-09-06 03:30:03 +0000 UTCThis flashback coming to a close is a triumphant achievement. Congratulations on telling a fantastic origin story with depth of character and delectable intrigue for what this means for the future! To your question, the speech bubble was clear enough to me, given the context. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story! I'll be excited to see what comes next :)
JennyAmara
2024-09-06 03:21:42 +0000 UTC
