XaiJu
RobinHarper
RobinHarper

patreon


Being Fiona 036

Going to post this a few hours early. Also, in case you missed it, Fiona #35, posted yesterday is just below.

Sexy swimsuits ahead!

Also, Fiona, you need to take better care of your friends!

Being Fiona 036 Being Fiona 036 Being Fiona 036 Being Fiona 036 Being Fiona 036 Being Fiona 036

Comments

The nitpick was for the previous comic, I somehow posted it here instead. Do you have a link to the corrected Idealized? I had noticed a few mistakes and wanted to reread it while paying attention to typos, but if most have already been corrected, my effort would be mostly wasted.

Disbet

No, nitpicking is really good. I just finished the grammar edits Femur sent me for Idealized for when it gets posted to TGComics, and even after I, all of you, and Femur read through that comic, Femur's second editor still found a few mistakes! Everyone here on my Patreon are my first line of defense against silly mistakes like that! Also, I'm guessing this nitpick was also for the previous comic, because that's where I found that line. I've fixed it.

From the Files of Robin Harper

I feel bad for always sounding nitpicky, but on the second panel, "that fight would probably have been the same if I have just made..." probably needs to be "that fight would probably have been the same if I had just made..." ;)

Disbet


More Creators