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Dick Picture Perfect - 24

Hey, wow, 24 chapters. I started this story, knowing exactly how it was going to end, and I got it right.

If you are not up to date on Dick Picture Perfect, read the previous chapters here:

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1PjgC9gOuSUlhIQ7DIuqs3ilXWPemuWh7?usp=sharing

I do hope you like it. I do hope the ending works for you. I thrive and improve on feedback.

On getting this far, I have one major improvement that would have to be sorted out in a second draft. Powering up the conflict - Will choosing sex and control over women over real connection with his friends and the women in his life - is very understated in most of the early story. I hope that'll also even out the pacing. The last three chapters come across at breakneck speeds compared to the previous 21.

Thank you all so much for the support! I don't think I'd have endings for practically anything I write without you backing me. It truly means the world to me. Hope you're all safe and healthy.


PS - A note on Sales Taxes

All of my tiers are marked, accurately, as General Support. There shouldn't be any sales taxes. 

Dick Picture Perfect - 24

Comments

Yes, yes it did.

Neal Johnstone

Well, that escalated quickly :D


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