Hey, I've added another tool to my arsenal. I've started using a text to speech reader as I edit. I definitely catch more of my mistakes now. I haven't done anything retroactively yet. I will be soon. I'm going to start with Small Town Goddesses and then move on to Blizzard while doing each new chapter before I post it here.
If you are not caught up with Dick Picture Perfect you can read the previous chapter here:
https://drive.google.com/open?id=1PjgC9gOuSUlhIQ7DIuqs3ilXWPemuWh7
I've also added a cast of characters list. There will be more girls added but all of the individuals are named (I don't know if I gave Philia's name when I introduced her behind the restaurant):
https://drive.google.com/open?id=10xEYZfY-S0VS3jF9B7aPiQ7a8kEpXpIfQ49ddQWNQ5Q
Thank you all for your support!