Pink World (Comic) - Page 20
Added 2022-01-27 09:51:27 +0000 UTCTop Heavy Pleasure Doll Shy Unlocked
Comments
I'd say this was another well-constructed page. Good use of expressions where available, easily read from the top to the bottom, more canvas saved for bigger moments while strategically using two panels side-by-side to introduce some quick growth in order to spice up the moment, leaving us transitioning into the next page. The switch back from Spider fucking her tits/mouth to Spike rutting her proper is probably the roughest part of it. It not only flips the perspective around 180, going from behind Spike to in front of him, it also jumps a lot in the action. It's hard to say what might've been cut from this page that could've made the transition smoother or if it would've needed some of the next page to help out, but, yeah, the movement from panel 3 to panel 4 in terms of the action wasn't quite so smooth, but otherwise, good page.
Artorius
2022-01-29 06:17:50 +0000 UTCLove the butterfly eyeliner!
meepsalot
2022-01-27 14:01:27 +0000 UTCSpike WANT ass!
Martin McNeal
2022-01-27 13:48:36 +0000 UTCSo is applejack next?
Cole jones
2022-01-27 09:57:28 +0000 UTC
