Pink World (Comic) - Page 19
Added 2022-01-23 20:18:26 +0000 UTCThe mood's gotten to him.
Poll for next page tomorrow
Comments
As everyone's fashions change, it might be neat to see AJ swap her typical cowgirl hat for a party one, glittering pink or zebra print, that sort of thing. Headwear that would feel at home during a bachelorette party.
Bennett Billard
2022-01-25 02:14:52 +0000 UTCIt will be interesting to see Fluttershy's transformation. She's always been my favorite of Annon's bimbos, and her claim to fame is having the biggest breasts. Right now, I believe she's AS big or slightly smaller than Rainbow Dash, but her other trademark is her lactation, so expect that she'll come into her own when her milk comes in. Really loving this comic
basic13
2022-01-24 22:04:07 +0000 UTCSo the obvious standout here is the breaking away from a typical framing format with AJ and Rarity in the top right. It's easy to see why you went with this; if you'd popped them into a proper frame the paneling's black lines would've necessitated either cutting some of them out to fit or shrinking/working with less canvas space in order for it to fit there. It makes good use of the negative space of Spike and Shy's panels, using up space that wouldn't be central to the reader's view (Spike's Back, some of Shy's hair) in order to give Rar and Applejack a full view. It's a good implementation of this break in the paneling and doesn't take away from the other panels. The last panel I think might not quite translate the size we see of Applejack in the first panel, as it feels like AJ's cheeks translate too quickly into her thighs compared to what we see in the first panel, though it might be a combination of Jack's posture and the angle; it does seem like, given her pressing herself into Rarity's face, that most of her ass might be in the air rather than pressing down and around her head. Counterbalancing that is what I feel are three good panels that follow a consistent theme of the paneling of this comic so far, the increasing intimacy of shots between panels. In this case drawing us closer to Shy's face as Spike makes his demands. Here there's less to be said because it's just three very solid panels where, combined with the first of AJ and Rarity, we continue to see expression work really livening up a scene.
Artorius
2022-01-24 07:26:19 +0000 UTCI'm loving this comic great job with this page I can't wait to see more of it and I can't wait to see the characters change more.
Cole jones
2022-01-23 23:21:28 +0000 UTCAh yeah thanks, fixed
Annon
2022-01-23 21:34:23 +0000 UTCEveryone looks so good in this comic
snakebit1995
2022-01-23 21:24:21 +0000 UTCDamn this is great. THough I do notice a spelling error in Rarity's first line, looks like you're missing an "I" in "Mind if bury myself"
BioYuGi
2022-01-23 20:58:18 +0000 UTCthe pages are really getting better. I like Fluttershy's expression
gwadahunter
2022-01-23 20:52:15 +0000 UTC
