Pink World (Comic) - Page 18
Added 2022-01-09 19:42:05 +0000 UTCShy gains extra maximum attentiveness levels.
Am gonna join a week-long seminar from tomorrow to expand upon my skillset, taking advantage of no commissions.
Wanted to crank out another page before that. Voting will resume when I'm back. In the meantime feel free to use the comments as a free write-in on what you'd like to vote on happening on the next page.
Comments
Thanks again for the feedback. Apologies for not replying to your previous comments, but know they’ve been read and appreciated
Annon
2022-01-10 08:47:18 +0000 UTCEnjoy your seminar, Annon, hopefully you get a lot out of it! Now onto this page. Dash collapsing to the side there is a fun visual and a good way to transition the action but, as everybody's transforming, it'll still hopefully be seen where hers continues to take her. I don't doubt it will but it's just a thought that comes to mind. Low number of panels but also a very slow, steady build up of action and a lot of full panels for us to get engrossed in. Fluttershy has been turning out excellently, as she almost always does it seems, and it'll be fun to see how she goes from here as a more passive partner than Rainbow was for Spike. It actually presents a nice, good flip where Twilight was dominated, Rainbow dominates and then Flutters flips it back around. Keeps things fresh-ish as it flips from style to style. Seeing spike be so tender by kissing her neck is also a good way to flip things around. Some intense but loving sex here would be a good fit for Fluttershy's general feel and would give us an additional turnaround from Twilight and Dash. Fluttershy here is very expressive in both panels we see her in and the way the magic's transformed her has really exentuated her. Like I said, eager to see how it continued given how her votes came around and how Fluttershy's themes generally lend themselves towards a soft, motherly/MILFy, loving bimbo. Good page, I'd say.
Artorius
2022-01-09 23:34:00 +0000 UTCWe haven't done much with Pinkie yet so let's do something different. Hair is usually a secondary change for you transformations but what if its primary one for Pinkie white a truly truly outrageous mane that dwarfs her. Or something maybe odder would be Rarity having made clothes for herself out of her own hair while its still attached. Might be too odd but could see it being really cool.
Enochi
2022-01-09 23:11:04 +0000 UTCPerhaps have something involving something similar to Spike's Greed growth. The more pussy he fucks the bigger he get. I know it is technically what is happening already, but what if his dick becomes the perfect dick to whomever he fucks in that state
Martin McNeal
2022-01-09 22:45:27 +0000 UTCI find it weird how much bigger spikes balls are then his dick but still love this page and as for what could happen maybe showing the other girls masturbating and getting bigger and maybe their new personalitys becoming more prominent and maybe show twi and rainbow after they've had sex kissing and getting bigger while watching spike.
Cole jones
2022-01-09 20:18:13 +0000 UTCAnd getting some more it seems!
meepsalot
2022-01-09 20:06:55 +0000 UTCHahahahahaha oh this is so good, Spike's having a ball
BioYuGi
2022-01-09 20:00:05 +0000 UTCHope it’s informative! As for what I’d like to see guess I wanna see how applejack is looking right now
meepsalot
2022-01-09 19:53:51 +0000 UTCFirst off I gotta say the one thing I think I like the most about this comic has been the hair, it looks so full and voluminous. In terms of what next, it might be interesting to get some reactions from the girls about how Spike is doing and how it's turning them on, etc.
snakebit1995
2022-01-09 19:53:48 +0000 UTCEnjoy your seminar, I hope it will help you to improve. and I like this page, like the old saying "less is more"
gwadahunter
2022-01-09 19:48:56 +0000 UTC
