(Comic) Pink World - Page 6
Added 2021-10-12 23:40:22 +0000 UTCNo Poll for the next page unfortunately. Would like to use the page for a bit of set-up before the next one for a better story flow.
By this point the Dirty-Minded feat of Rarity has evolved and will get to shine.
Comments
Absolutely, it's good to take shots like these and the experience will just make drawing similar things in the future smoother.
Artorius
2021-10-13 18:18:54 +0000 UTCYeah am getting very ambitious, so errors are prone to happen, but can't keep drawing the same thing over and over again afterall. Will pay more attention to the lighting.
Annon
2021-10-13 14:08:56 +0000 UTCRD is so much fun to develop
Annon
2021-10-13 14:07:33 +0000 UTCvery observant!
Annon
2021-10-13 13:37:25 +0000 UTCLooks great and is it just me or is rd getting some abs?
Rob greener
2021-10-13 13:16:48 +0000 UTCAs far as putting off another vote, it makes sense given that there are a good few balls in the air. It gives you time to develop more on them in their own right while still developing some of the others in the background before you throw some more balls into the air. Plus, as you said, if the next page is taking so much time, it's good to prioritize. The fourth panel was definitely ambitious in its posing and perspective but I think that ambition ended up meeting a few awkward patches; the way RD's pose of sitting up on one elbow is hitting the perspective makes the proportions and anatomy of her stomach feel a bit off here, with the two sides making it seem like there's a much harsh angle to it than there's probably meant to be, like she's partially folded like a piece of paper rather than bending gently. With AJ in that panel it's more like her left arm's angle is a bit unclear, with her shoulder dipping back a little far compared to where it seems like the rest of her right arm is. The positioning of her legs via her hips in that panel seems mostly alright. Again, this panel is *very* ambitious in terms of everything going into it at once so it's still good work overall, it's just clear where a few of the speedbumps were. The lighting in the four twerking panels is a bit of a mis-match compared to the panel before them, with AJ's back cast in a bit too much of a shadow compared to where her hair and hat is. How to keep track of how a room should be lit in a scene without showing the lighting source constantly is one of those art things that I know nothing about, but it's still something that can be noticeable. Aside from that it's very solid, the expressions and art is on point pretty much everywhere else and, again, the little changes being noticeable from page to page are fun. Showing AJ's growth through her underwear sliding up her ass is very much to my taste; as much as I can appreciate clothes magically changing as part of a transformation, having the clothes stay the same while the person being changed grows out and around them is something I just find to be part of the appeal and helps to really sell and communicate the degree to which a person if shifting around.
Artorius
2021-10-13 03:21:05 +0000 UTCI love how long RD's hair is getting and how she's just groping herself while this is going on. And those ass shots of AJ are tremendous.
BioYuGi
2021-10-13 02:46:20 +0000 UTCMuch apprecited!
Annon
2021-10-13 00:42:36 +0000 UTCWell then i wish you good luck with it!
meepsalot
2021-10-13 00:41:45 +0000 UTCdon't be quite so sure about that. It seems to be a very time-consuming page
Annon
2021-10-13 00:18:55 +0000 UTCFine by me! Probably means we’ll get to see it sooner anyhow, which I can’t complain about!
meepsalot
2021-10-13 00:15:59 +0000 UTCinstead we take bets to whose boobs will be larger!
Magnaking
2021-10-13 00:10:59 +0000 UTCThought it'd be fun to have her be the honest and positive attitude cowgal throughout.
Annon
2021-10-13 00:02:59 +0000 UTCKinda fun seeing AJ so confident in her sexiness. Normally she's written/drawn more reserved about it in the stories.
snakebit1995
2021-10-13 00:00:26 +0000 UTCShould have mentioned what it'll be about. but yes, that and Rarity will get to use her previous feat she gained as it now has evolved.
Annon
2021-10-12 23:59:38 +0000 UTCSo will the next page just be them all growing in there breast and butts then.
Cole jones
2021-10-12 23:57:05 +0000 UTC
