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Chapter 761 - Eight gold coins

After calming down, he faces me fully. "I’m sorry for teasing you, Nathaniel. And you don’t have to beg or plead. I even give you my vow: Neither I nor anyone under my control will hurt or threaten your family or friends. At least until your tutorial ends. After that, we’ll see what our relationship turns into, whether you accept your place by my side or if we fight. I’m inclined to think we’ll fight, but I still hope for the opposite."

Some of the words resonate through the System. In the way certain vows or challenges do, he has brought the System in as his witness.

I stand there, clutching the mana I’ve been gathering since I arrived. He doesn't have to tell me, I know I’m ready to fight and die if I have to. A part of me even thinks that if I can't straight-up kill him, I can make him pay. I could cripple him for life, forcing him back into the pathetic state he was in before his rebirth.

Oh, how much I want to do it. Even though he hasn't touched anyone I care about yet, it doesn't matter to me. Just the fact that he stands over me, holding that power, irks me to my core. It’s just like the first floor of the tutorial. My emotions are exactly the same as they were back then, in those weeks I lived in uncertainty before I became strong enough to be comfortable.

The fact that first-floor Nathaniel is still here, in a way, relieves me. I sift through my emotions, realizing I meant what I said before. All these millions of people around me could be sacrificed. Men, women, even... even children. Just for the people I care for to be safe. And the realization that it might need to come to that means one thing. I’m simply not strong enough.

There is nothing else to be said. No need for machinations or anything. I’m just not enough, and I won’t be making excuses for myself, like that he is much older and more experienced. None of that would change that simple fact.

I chuckle in the end as I take a deep breath. “I accept your vow,” I say to Adrian. “And I agree, you won.”

“It is true that I cheated, but honestly, I will continue to do so. But I like how you said it, that I won, instead of saying you lost. Just a little twist on wording, but it says a lot about you. How much longer do you have before you return to the tutorial?”

“Three hours and change,” I answer, relaxing, though not fully.

Adrian stands there in what seems like a better mood. “An Earth Stay token is a weird reward. In a way, it's extremely valuable, and in another, not so much. It allows you to return to Earth, yes, but you can’t enter the World Dungeon, not that anyone below Champion would survive it. If you use the token, you can kill attendees and set your rule in a day, yes, but you could do that in a tournament as well. So its value comes with knowledge.”

He fixes the sleeves of his suit as he continues talking. “Every planet with a Sovereign Spark also has a fragment somewhere on the planet. Though we never know why. If it is connected to the Spark or the opposite. As for the fragment, it is usually a very pure one, and its power can vary a lot. It is safe to say it is purer than almost anything found in the tutorial, with the exception of the most powerful ones. But what is incredible is its value. There are people in Beyond who will buy it for tens of millions of shards, offering plenty more than for the ones from the tutorial. Other than the fragment, there are less noticeable advantages. The system remembers you stepped here before your tutorial ended, like one of its darlings. It becomes easier for you to become Champion of this planet, and you might find yourself just a little bit luckier in the World Dungeon, and-”

A signal is sent to me, and it causes Adrian to stop talking.

He notices that a pulse sent to me through a [Ley Line] connected somewhere far away. The line is much thinner than a hair, weak, and unable to do anything except send that signal before breaking apart.

Even I didn't know about that line until it activated and broke, and at the same moment, memories flood my mind.

"Nathaniel, what was that?" Adrian asks in a slightly threatening tone.

Taking in all these memories, I, instead of answering, remind him, "You gave me a vow."

Then my vessel, piloted by Mapthaniel, steps out of the teleportation mark placed on my back, and more of the memories I have been hiding from Adrian flood my mind as I remember the existence of Sneaky. I don't remember all that he has hidden, but it is just enough to make me understand.

A flash of a memory of me appearing on Earth, manifesting my vessel, letting Mapthaniel pilot it, and search the coordinates I had gotten from someone whose identity I don't know. Bits of memories from Mapthaniel surface, along with the effort he spent searching while I moved around.

"I have to go," I tell Adrian.

As expected, he tries to stop me, but my vessel moves prepared. I don't even pretend to try to face him or avoid over-relying on black mana. I use it right away, and the vessel turns black with pale scars visible, my evolved trait glowing more than before against that background of pure dark.

For just the shortest moment, the vessel contests Adrian and his efforts to stop me before it is entirely blown away. That short moment is enough for me to teleport and erase the track behind me so he can't follow.

But before I disappear fully, something bites into my leg. Looking down, I see Septa clinging to me. We teleport, appearing where my vessel located, the dungeon holding the fragment that lies on Earth.

The night swallows the horizon entirely. No stars reflect on the surface, no moon shines in the sky. The ocean at night is like a moving void, broken only by the violent rise and fall of black water with each wave collapsing into another.

I ignore Septa as I plunge beneath the surface, and the world above vanishes instantly. There is not a second to waste, as I know he will be here soon, angered that I am trying to take the fragment away from him, the one he so arrogantly left there to take later. It isn't even me who predicted he wouldn't claim it yet, but currently, I don't know who told me.

The sea grows calmer the deeper I go, but that calm feels wrong, unnatural. The currents pull at me, strong, yet leaving the surface above deceptively still. The darkness down here feels ancient.

I form a single thermal orb above me, and light erupts outward like a spear of light. For a brief moment, the water glows, revealing moving currents and distant shapes that vanish as soon as the light reaches them. The darkness presses on that light as if eager to blow it out.

Three shapes emerge from the black, sliding into the light with terrifying silence and smooth movement. Sharks, each big as a ship. Their bodies are pale only by contrast to the darkness.

[Shark - lvl 299]

[Shark - lvl 230]

[Shark - lvl 239]

A laser-thin stream of thermal energy cuts through the water, not letting the depths cool it down. It lights the darkness and cuts each of the sharks in half as I move it in a wide, sweeping arc as I continue to rush down.

I see the entrance to the dungeon below me when the sea explodes. Miles and miles of water disappear, split and moved apart, revealing a transparent red figure floating high above with Adrian in front of it. A projectile launches at me just as I reach the entrance. The notification asking me if I want to enter pops up, but I barely read it before I confirm and hurry to enter.

Once inside, I stagger and cough while I rest my hand against the wall. I take a deep breath and close my eyes for a few moments. I spit up clogged blood and wait for my body to heal, a big part of my back missing from Adrian’s attack.

But of course, the wound on my back refuses to heal, taking me only a moment to recognize it as damage caused by the Fragment that Luan used to hold.

I use Lily’s healing mark on it, which causes it to heal slowly, and I patch it up in layers of mana.

Then I swing my leg, and Septa finally lets go, acrobatically twisting in the air before landing on her spider legs. She lowers her body and stares at me.

Observing the leg she kept biting, I use several more healing marks on it. I then coat my hand in mana and cut it off entirely, burning away the remaining toxin with massive releases of thermal energy from my body as much as I can. I leave the rest to be handled by Lily’s marks.

I already have experience with this, so I know how to fight against it, yet it is far more dangerous than the one used on me at the Academy.

After that, I regenerate my leg while facing the spider.

I don’t worry about Adrian entering, after all, the dungeon with the Fragment is for a single person only.

Not much time remains, so I get combat-ready, triggering my combat sub-minds, preparing arrays, and changing the movement pattern of my mana. Then I head into the dungeon, only to sense Septa follow behind me.

As I go over my memories once more, a single cold thought settles in.

Did you really think I gathered all that mana just for you? That I would let you throw me around like trash? I already have your vow. That was all I needed.

And now, I will take this fragment from you as well.

***

Flashback Nathaniel

"I have a question for you," I say to Ruby.

"Ask."

"What does he plan to do?"

"I can tell you, but if you are not careful, the people you care about will die," Ruby says.

"Tell me."

She pauses for a moment, studying my expression. “He wants to use a difficulty change token and go from Beyond to the tutorial. He probably hopes to complete it in around a year and a half in its entirety, but Diligence will invoke his veto for sure, and I know what kind of vote to expect from the others. They will throw him to the Thirteenth Floor instead, and it will result in him completing his tutorial while still feeling as though everything is going according to his plan. Some people on your planet will die, the humans he looks down on. He won’t hurt your family, nor the families of anyone else from the tutorial. At least not yet, and that is your advantage. But you can’t beat him. Not yet.”

"Not yet," I agree.

Ruby nods. “Adrian is broken. He always had Pride set as the goal of his envy. He used to be brilliant, he truly was, especially during his tutorial. Showing him the record of Pride’s battle may have been the turning point. Right after that, I saw him mentally close himself off, convincing himself he would never be enough, even if he did not fully understand it. Or it could have been those five decades as a human on Earth, when he believed he had failed.”

"What-"

She doesn't let me finish. "Knowing him, he will tell you more. Though broken, Adrian still has all that knowledge and talent. It is as if he continues to move according to his plan, not realizing he already lost, that he is already missing something important. But he is still dangerous, like a mortally wounded animal continuing to push along."

"And you are still helping him."

"Yes, I am, because of the skills he possesses. Because sometimes, such an animal can, in the spur of the moment, become the most dangerous. And I have been wrong before. To explain it better, I will tell you a bit about Pride."

"I won't say no to that, you know it."

"I know. Pride uses his [Mirror] in a very different way from anyone else who possesses that skill. Pride’s body is at this point stronger than a dragon’s. He is one of the beings with the highest physical stats in the system. So Pride likes to [Mirror] his opponent. He mirrors onto himself his opponent's much lower stats and restricts himself to enjoy the battle just that little bit. With Adrian, we had hoped he would [Mirror] Pride’s full stats while Pride would drop to Adrian’s, giving him a little chance for a fight or for someone else to take advantage of that."

Before I can say anything, she stops me again. "Yes, I know how pathetic this is, so just continue to listen. Another of Adrian’s skills that he would instantly kill you for knowing about is [Possession]. That's the one that helped him take over a newborn baby that later became Christoph. That's what allowed him to take over the Wraith, and that's what he might be planning to do with you or your sister. To raise you and then take over one of you. You for your body, traits, and talent for mana, or your sister for her [Duplication], which is so similar to the Last Elf he admires."

I stand up and walk around, doing my best to keep calm. "And you knew that."

"Yes."

"Tell me, would you mind if he took over me or my sister?"

"Yes, I don't want that to happen."

"But you wouldn't mind it if it meant a better chance at killing Pride."

"I'm not a good person."

"Fuck's sake, Ruby."

"I always tried to make you understand my greed. But I can tell you with absolute certainty that I'm willing to help you rather than him. It will be difficult and require sacrifices, but if you do what-"

"No," I say simply.

"Nathaniel, I-"

"I said no. A question. Since he possesses Wraith, can he use his skills?"

"You figure things out too quickly sometimes. Yes, some of them, though it is limited. Some of the skills he might not understand enough to use fully, and some might not be powerful without Calvorn."

"Great. Why didn't Diligence want to give me the Earth Stay token? What is so valuable about it?"

"There is a Fragment on each newly awakened planet. Pure, not recreated by the system, so even more valuable."

"Is Adrian the type to go after it instantly or leave it for later?"

"Later, he is still getting used to the other fragment he got not that long ago."

"Great, give me the coordinates."

"I won't."

"Why?"

"Because you are stubborn. Just do what I say. My plan-"

"No."

“Do you not trust me?”

“Even you have to admit how bullshit it is to ask that after all your talk about greed.”

“I can give you a vow. I can swear I will help you. I can take the System as my witness that I think you have a better chance to fulfill my wish than Adrian ever had. But if I do that, the other Rulers will listen and know. If Wrath knows, it could end badly.”

“There is no need to,” I wave it off. “I won’t lie and say what you did makes me happy. But I always knew your motivations, and in a way, I like knowing what stands behind every one of your acts. I can even use it all against Adrian. A poor, betrayed Nathaniel, coming there to die or beg,” I snicker. “The asshole likes to read my feelings, so I’ll let him have some fun.”

I look at her properly then. She stands still, shoulders tense, quiet in a way that feels unfamiliar.

Taking a step toward her. Slowly, deliberately, I reach into my pocket and pull out several golden coins. They glint faintly in the light as I hold them up between us. She hesitates before lifting her hand.

I let the coins fall one by one into her palm.

Smiling to myself, I say softly, “I still remember your imitation from the second floor. She paid gold for me so Lissandra could examine me. Damned monster, even as an imitation, she started realizing this is a tutorial, and suspected that I am an attendee. Ruby back then took a hundred gold from Lissandra, who had no idea it was actually only eight gold they asked for me.”

I let the eighth coin cling against the others as I look back at her face. “Now I’m paying you eight gold for the coordinates. I don’t need vows. I don’t need promises.”

Ruby opens her hand and stares at the coins. “These are really from the second floor. Where did you get them?”

“I have my resources.”

“You must have just bought them from a Beyond attendee who kept them." She pauses, "This is so stupid.” For some reason, she looks more taken aback than I expected, her emotions clearly written on her face.

I say nothing and wait for her decision. Finally, she closes her hand and slips the coins into her pocket.

“You’ll get only a rough estimate, the size of a small country, for those few coins,” she says in the end.

Comments

WOOOHOOOO GO RUBITHANIAL

Moon Winchester

Nats himbo rizz is actually undefeated. Flashbackthaniel showed us peak.

caeven

He has had that for ages. Dont know where exactly he developed it tho. Might have been 3th or 4th floor

Joran Spans

I may be forgetting something, but since when can Nathaniel make teleportation marks? Is it some new power?

Nemesis

Quick question... That easy difficulty chat... Is no longer available?

Rocotrap

Not seeing it, Firstly I don't recall Jesus making a promise not to kill Judas family or have the potential threat to possess and use people. Also Judas sold Jesus out to mortals who could kill him, Nat can't kill Adrian currently Finally and the main issue is that Greed sold info on the fragment, the info about Adrian didn't cost anything or involve any gold

P K

It's one person at a time, you don't have to be champion lvl, it's just champion lvl difficulty

P K

Thank you for the chappie!

Kirin

I don't get it. Can Adrian enter the dungeon at the same time as Nat or not? Also, I thought the dungeon was Champion level only. I am confused :(

AL

It was confirmed this chapter. Adrian killed and seemingly took the fragment from him.

Michael Williams

Or something to do with the depth. Abyssal Tides, maybe? Not sure how it’ll translate to a real ability…but the names are cool, at least ha

Jonathan Nading

Fragments gotta be something water based. Earths like 80% water + the fragment is under water. Maybe something like Fragment of Changing Tides

Mister Cakers

He is going to give septa to Minjae

Goof Nasty

“Other than the fragment, there are less noticeable advantages. The system remembers you stepped here before your tutorial ended, like one of its darlings.”

Abomb1723

Oh! You're right! I bet he did

Nate 3000

I bet he got the coins from Lily. Remember when he asked her to get him some money on the second floor, and she was able to? She was probably still carrying it around with her because it was something Nat asked her for 😜

Nemesis

Considering her position, I feel like she is actually selling this information for a pittance. This is the ruler of Greed, i am sure her services are usually worth a lot more for even a minor thing

Nemesis

So septa, friend or foe, I feel like she really didn't try that hard to kill him and he said only one person could be in that dungeon so how is it that she was let inside, I don't think biscuit would like it very much if she somehow got attached to nat 😂.

Audrey WJ

So about the earth stay token, I knew he didn't get on when it was previously brought up as a reward for his beyond quest and diligence said he couldn't have it but Nat also did not express any great interest in the token or the lose of it as well, he ended up getting better rewards after all but I knew it had come up as a reward before and he didn't get it. Oh well I still think it's a dumb reward and it is only good because of Adrian being on earth lol.

Audrey WJ

Well, we don’t know. It has never been stated clearly what a fragment is. All we know that they are sought after. And there are different types and they all have different abilities. Some can be overpowered, where it destroys a planet like the first star… while some can be like the eternal flame fragment, that is super hot, and have different flames. While some can make healing difficult/ almost impossible. But overall, fragment is a bonus to anybody. If they can control/ tame it.

TYRELL GRAY

Wait, was a fragment again? Have we gone over this?

Darryl Williams

I feel like if anyone could make a vow and break or bend it, it would be the ruler of greed. Greed is her literal thing I wouldn't be surprised if she still wants Adrien and Nat at the same time.

Noah Redden

Sounds more like an envy skill to me

Noah Redden

20 smackaroos, 8 gold coins, 2 Cyrodillic Dollars baby

NerdyFellow

Her willing to make a vow she wouldn't do that for no reason she truly likes nat after taking in her copys memories I wonder if there's a reason they don't Normally do so. She clearly wants to use him but she also clearly cares for him in some way

Death56

Some part of me wonders if Nat is going to use the fragment to try and learn [Weapon] from Nyssa (not in the sense of a full system bet Lis style since she probably doesn’t have high enough level to bet it under the system rules) - so he can skill merge it with [Empyrean Lance] for [Empyrean Weapon]

thisisniall

Fun skill idea for Greed: What if one of Greed's main starting skills was [Fixation]? A variant from focus where it shows lines/paths to what they are fixating upon. In her case, her ability would show her paths to Pride and how to obtain her goal. Sounds like a skill a Greed candidate would have.

Andrew Miller

The vow was only for his friends and family, Nat was not included in it

Cody

Yaaaas manipulative her, king.

jax rammus

So he does have loans fragment then?

tishane Imperial MageKiller

He attacked Nat even after the vow , so will there be a System backlash ?

Muntu Omnyama

Bahahaha yesss get fucked Adrian

DrSubterfuge

Of all the power us nat has gone after I want him to get earth's fragment the most. Adrian can go pound sand.

Marshall

... Actual peak *chefskiss* , oh my goodness. Turned the tables on every theory I had, but also just switching train tracks. Fantastic read as always!

Morde24

Honestly my theory is Septa is doing this on her own. She'll have her own reason for fighting Nat but she'll reveal she got 'kidnapped' by Adrian

granndfunk

“You’ll get only a rough estimate, the size of a small country, for those few coins,” Bahaha Greed to the end

granndfunk

WoW 👌 👏

Mark Bullock

Adrian is an Envy subclass--if he's bonded to Septa can he use that to enter the dungeon? I suspect Nat's already thought of that, and has some last minute close timing planned...

Kevin Brock

I second this

Mark Bullock

Thank you!

Andrew

Flipping the table and running, love it

Wallaby Vonwise

Fraudrian gets bamboozled over and over and if he tries to fight it he cripples himself. Sophie is so much better with the mind stuff it boggles the mind how tiny Fraudrian is in comparison. Group four can eat Fraudrian for breakfast and have room for Pride on the menu.

Arnon Parenti

I know right. It’s crazy, like one thing I like about this story is how each character develop and grows. Like I really don’t know, what nat is planning to do with his skills until I see it, which is amazing.

TYRELL GRAY

Kaboom, as minion would say 😉

Nemesis

If I remember correctly, Nat was explicitly told that she had absorbed the memories. It was also made clear that it was what influenced her request to be referred to as Ruby by him, instead of Greed.

facetiousk

Clearly the most important thing here is that nat can manifest portions of his mind outside his body to complete tasks.

J W

Did anyone else notice that Nat making this payment to Ruby suggests he may suspect that she has somehow taken on the memories of second floor Ruby? Or maybe its just that he has started to accept her as his 'Ruby' to some degree

Nemesis

That seems to be the case

Nemesis

I was worried Nat would have bowed down, but he pulled off messing Adrian instead.

arnumart

What do you reckon the fragment will be? Fragment of original mana? 😜

Nemesis

Pride mirroring stats of Nat with 1001 constituion at level 2000. I just can see the ending of it

Rico Caceres

Holy moly, you write absurdly compelling characters

Boyo

What I just read, damn! It's great that Nat from the first floor is back. Did I say that or think it? Nat, when necessary, is an even worse manipulator than Tess. What an exciting chapter.

Manaless

He doesn’t need to change her if he can kill pride

Schmidt

Fragment of information could be fitting for this earth. Processing. But not very flashy.

Bob

"I'm not helping you. You're helping Me." 😁

Youkai-sama

RAAAAAAHHH I LOVE THIS STORY

Rene Duvall

I have one wish that he actually gets to keep his reward and doesn't get the fragment yoinked from him again, and a question, I'm not sure what things the fragments can be related too but is fragment of mana a thing, not sure if I would want him to have such a thing or not, he has kinetic, thermal and Mana, maybe something new or maybe an update to his kinetic since he already got the upgrade to thermal with his heart

FarFromLogic

Thank you!

Florin Cojocaru

Wonder which greedy ruler would like a fragment like that

frankie doerr

I just know it’d be min-jae, the envious whiny brat

Alex O'Connor

I ship them so much

Fdrugc

I'm hoping one day Nat will change her greed

Fdrugc

Do we think that this time Nat will be allowed to keep the Fragment? Had it been one created by the system I think yes, but the Rulers will want a pure one...

Joe Woodhouse

Hmm. Do we know Adrian's subclass for sure? I had a search and couldn't quickly find it. If he is also Pride then yes, I can see him being tricked into trying to "out-Pride Pride". Related, I can see him trying to [Mirror] [ ] and losing control of it... because he didn't also use [Mirror] on [Mana Manipulation]! That would be narratively satisfying! A battle won and lost solely due to [Mana Manipulation] skill levels!!

Joe Woodhouse

This was an amazing chapter. It was excellently paced. I loved it. I was thinking for a while there that Nat would submit and agree to be fraudrians champion in order to save his friends and family. But loved the misdirect that the Nat we saw at the start of earth had already sealed his memories of the plan. Well played Cerim.

Michael Williams

Really hope Adrian doesnt try to pull a [Possession] on say Min-Jae or Sophie in the future if he's losing against Tutorial End Nathaniel. Would be annoying if we had one of those Villains running off before they get finished off.

Balsamic ThunderThighs

Always keep gold handy when dealing with Greed

Zard

Great chapter! And damn i thought Nat was about to switch handlers near the end there, hope Ruby learned her lesson she almost crossed one line too many.

Arme nd

Called it: keeping him alive just to make him his champion ? No way in hell Adrian would do that, there had to be a "good" reason, and here we finally have it! Otherwise it would've been too... Lacking ? I love it! Tftc cerim, you did a very very very good job here!

Gutz

So the dungeon with the fragment is different from the World Dungeon?

TheOne320

Tftc!!!

Claro reyes

I think pride also has black mana though

Jake Atwood

I love that Ruby is very sentimental even tho she’s very powerful. This would be a good thing to use on a RubyxNat fanfic

Emmanuel Martinez

I knew you wouldn't disappoint! Great chapter!

Terri Harris

Lets go! Sneakythaniel coming in from the top ropes with a steel chair! Lmao 👏👏👏

Woodstock179

I love how he’s basically making mapthaniel pay rent for using up so much brain power by making him do side quests

frankie doerr

Oh damn, what a plot twist, sorry I doubted you Cerim.

Krzychu0304

The final moment of this chapter reminds me strongly with the Bible and the moment when Judas sold Jesus Christ for 30 pieces of silver. Here Adrian was sold by Ruby, the Ruler of Greed, for 8 pieces of gold. Coincidence? I don’t think so. 🤔

Adrian Rake

Doesn't Ruby stalk him 24/7? How she doesn't know where he got coins :P

frozzi

Helll yeah, loving this.

Oliver

Awesome!

Aoth the Arcane

Oh man. At first I was kind of annoyed that it was all a facade and there wasn't going to be a fight, or Nat didn't have some trick to defeat Adrian, but as I read on I realised that, while not what I hoped for, this was more or less in line with what I had expected. In fact, I like this better. I also like his relationship with Ruby, in a weird way he trusts her (because he believes he understands her, more or less).

Nemesis

First freaking lases slicing up shark boies was badass, second fuck fruadrian. People making end game theories are nuts. Bet none called the current arc and the real nat vs pride fight will be vanilla as hell but wholesome

Val the mysterious Jedi

Nat unleashed Rizzaniel for a critical strike lol, poor Ruby. What can men do against such reckless rizz?

zoarian

LET'S FUCKING GOOOO! TFTC!

Nerø

Is Adrian also possessing Septa? He might try some last minute fuckery. On another topic, Nat seems tailor made for fighting Pride? Absolutely garbage body stats, extreme mana stats, but also black mana. So if Pride Mirrors his body, even if he had a fuckton of mana, it'd all be dominated by Nat's black mana (which I'm assuming can't be mirrored). Not that it'd be a satisfying fight like that - I think Nat will face Pride full on.

zoarian

I love that the concept of nat basically making himself forget important information etc. just so he doesn't need to pretend not knowing, can fool himself and situations like this one a so much cooler thing than suddenly getting more powerful oder making the enemy do tropes we all had before. Really good writing there🫶

NoctisMi

Thanks for the chapter 😊

Erebus

Wait, that’s really interesting

Erebus

Damn I owe Ruby an apology thinking she switched up

Sushitrash

Prediction. Adrian will mirror Nathaniel's stats, his insane mana and low constitution. And hopefully blow the fuck up but probably just have troubles coping

Scraser

Fuck yea

RadiantSpren

Player, played.....👌 🤣

M van Dongen

Stuff really just happens in this story.

Gardor

I'm so happy. Excellent chapter cerim, I was a little disappointed at how much Adrian seemed to be "winning" it's so fitting that Nat will end up with Earths Fragment and that he managed to make one thing clear to Adrian... he doesn't hold all the chips, and he's not as smart as he thinks ;) 👌

Little Watchmaker

Thanks for the chapter

BlackRazaras

I never should have doubted you Nat

Hemi Rigby-Curtis

TFTC. Oh yissss!!

Lance Beam

I love Schemingthaniel!

mitchell kaiser

Great chapter, thanks man.

Napoleon

Ohhh dammm sneakythani3l is so real

ShyviaAngel

Let’s gooooo

Dakota Ulmer

TFTC!!!

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