Details Surrounding Emeric's "state"
Added 2023-05-11 17:49:26 +0000 UTCHey, hey! I added a bit more to Chapter 75 - right after Lily's POV.
I did get some good feedback and after a bit of thinking, I came to agree with it, so I added dialogue between Nathaniel and Ruby where they go over the way Nat killed Emeric.
I like the contrast between Lily's POV and the dialogue between Nat and Ruby.
Please, let me know what you think!
Comments
All thanks to your feedback :)
Miroslav Danko
2023-05-11 19:57:03 +0000 UTCIts a good addition indeed
Xaver Klein
2023-05-11 19:16:03 +0000 UTCIt definitely fits with Nate's character and is quite ingenious. It's a good addition.
Paper_Link189
2023-05-11 18:05:03 +0000 UTC
