Prophecy pg. 27.
Added 2019-01-07 16:38:47 +0000 UTCHere is the finished page 27.
I was so excited to get to this page! :D Just like I was with almost every single page... XP
Enjoy! :)
Comments
And comments like this makes me proud of being here :) I'm extremely happy you like the story so far :D When Prophecy was created, the goal was to put a nice little, unexpected twist in the middle, to shake the characters (and the readers :D) up a bit. I'm glad I succeeded with that :3
Zummeng
2019-01-08 09:30:15 +0000 UTCSad adorasnek is sad. :( Shen! Must protecc adorasnek! OK, more seriously... this is a real thing of beauty Zum. The story started out very... porn flick, in that the setup was that random guy gets plucked from a bad situation, rushed off to a palace, and gets to have sex with a beautiful girl without needing to woo her or anything. Standard smut fare. Then you grabbed the story and sent it careening off the tracks and now we have this lovely thing of the slave plucked out of nowhere to have sex with a beautiful girl sitting her down, caring about her, trying to learn about her as a person, and discovering the heartbreaking truth that this mystical prophesy seems to have consumed her life and she isn't sure who she is other than this role that she was given. And all of this treated with such real seriousness and pathos that the characters being nude this entire time just... goes away because it's so unimportant. That takes an artistic touch beyond being able to make visual art. Things like this make me proud to be one of your patrons. :)
DualThrones
2019-01-08 07:22:48 +0000 UTCI think she has opened up, and she's just now realizing how much the prophecy has shaped her life. It's literally all she knows.
Gwen The Goblin
2019-01-07 21:14:25 +0000 UTCOhhhhh, I was afraid of this :< Poor zaphira~
Ponpokora
2019-01-07 20:35:40 +0000 UTCShe has to open up; it sounds like she hasn't had any chance to before now.
Gabriele
2019-01-07 17:24:04 +0000 UTCMan, she is so deeply programmed. My heart aches for her and the childhood she must have gone through.
Parker Trotter
2019-01-07 16:43:08 +0000 UTC
