i did not expect this episode would end up being this long. This one got a lot of post editing, like the Demeter form in the middle and the ending writing, which if you look at page 55v1 it was supposed to end with that. But as I was working on the page I got an idea on how to transition into the next sequence of events better so I added another page XD
Generally ideas for a nicer transition gets birthed as I am reformatting the pages for webtoon so I end up re-editing patreon versions accordingly too XD
Now that I look at it I feel like sketch page 56v1 flows a little better than v2 so I might do a final edit on that one too. I generally tend to avoid long panels because I fear it will confuse the reader , but i think it might not the case this time around. simplicity always wins in the end.
phew I had a lot to say xD I don't blame you if you skimmed or not read it at all LOL
tldr
I redid some pages I thought would look better as you can see in the pics XD
p.s. we are on our way to Prague today, and tomorrow the convention starts. If you're attending check your messages in the morning for a safeword that grants you a free sketch ;3
Linda Sejic (Sigeel)
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