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Added 2023-09-28 18:49:48 +0000 UTCGot a couple complaints that the previous scene transition was too fast and this boy's location is unclear. I'll try to do what i can to address this, I might need to dedicated a while page to physically walking the boy back outside the front gate and drawing a map so people know where we are. It just sucks, I wanted to get back to the dialogue and story. Lack of clarity in a comic is the devil.
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A cheat you could try is some kind of [Denied entry] paperwork in the background of them walking to imply being sent back, in just one frame. An idea
Lyle E2
2023-09-29 08:58:20 +0000 UTC
