Book 1, Page 85
Added 2018-11-28 19:52:58 +0000 UTCHi! Barry here. From Becky and I, thank you so much for supporting SuperButch. It means a lot.
This is a page where Becky and I both changed the other's work. :-)
In the top tier, the layout with each of them sticking a hand into the other's panel to do the cigarette choreography was a change I suggested to Becky's rough layout.
In the bottom tier, the script originally called for one panel, rather than two panels, and it was pretty boring. Becky though of livening up the layout by splitting Lillian's line into two panels, with an extreme camera jump in between, and it really works.
This is the most fun part of collaboration - both of us pushed ideas forward, and the result is a better, more interesting page than the ideas we both started with.
See you next week!
