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The Beauty of Experience - Chapter 14

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Yep, finally some happiness for them. 😊 It's fun writing their insatiable and loving dynamic. Thank you!

Phew! A nice chapter of everyone being happy minus Andrea. These too cant get their hands off each other. So much tasty smut. Thanks

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You are more than welcome ! and there is nothing wrong with that..I can tell that you do and that's what makes this story even more amazing. Haha I love how 💜 you worded that inevitable lol Right 😩 even santa takes a break 364 days out of the year but not those two Lmao.🤣 Ahhh I'm excited I know you will do the chapter justice I honestly cannot wait until you post it and for now I will be re-reading all four chapters Oh that is very obvious, when it comes to Andrea you can definitely tell she does and honestly who doesn't and I'm sure being a Alpha Andrea was taught that they do not show their feelings Alpha's are the leaders and must not show weakness and I'm sure it didn't help when it came to her father ! Oh boy why am I not surprised. I feel like when push comes to Shove Kara will prove to Andrea why she's the new Alpha in her household...😩 me neither I can only imagine how that's going to go 👀 and you are more than welcome and no Let me Thank you for coming up with so many stories that have me so immersed that I forgot that your stories aren't being written for a T.V Show that's how good they are awwwwe 🥺 you are about to make me cry I am beyond grateful I can make your day that means a lot to me 💜✨❤️💚

Always read at your leisure! Thank you - I always put a lot of work into the chapters of The Beauty of Experience. Of course the pregnancy was inevitable with how they were sooo... frequently engaging. 😂The next chapter is coming together nicely and I'm looking forward to Lena's reveal to Kara, too. Andrea has her own set of issues which I'll delve into some chapters from now - tension will grow between her and Kara before it's going to diminish. And yeaaah, I can't wait for Andrea to find out, either! Thank you so much - knowing that the story makes your day better is my major inspiration to write it Honestly, it's what keeps me going at the moment - in all things! 💙❤️⭐️

Yesss, special pregnancy reveal for sure! 😁 Quite right about Kara and I'm excited to write the family bonding that will happen on their vacation in a few chapters! It's honestly going to be an obscenely long story, but it's all exciting in my head. It really makes me happy to hear you're excited for more since I love writing this one. Thank you so much! I feel bad for people like Andrea because they just can't help themselves and they always lose.

Yeah, I'm looking forward to the reveal where Kara finds out! You know, something important was meant to happen during the game night... and then I just left it out, haha. But it'll happen in the next chapter so I guess it's okay. Andrea won't be falling in a bottomless pit, alas, but at least Lena has Kara to always be there & make her feel better. 😊Thank you very much and I'm happy you enjoyed it and that you're looking forward to more! I hope you're well, safe.& happy! 💙❤️

😩 Forgive me for taking so long, to read the update let me Say first You never Disappoint Us when it comes to this story every Chapter you is Just amazing..honestly are we shocked 👀 That Lena’s finally pregnant I’m not 😂 the way those two go at it I’m only shocked that Lena didn’t get pregnant as soon as She stopped taking Her BC I mean the very next day 😂 Can’t wait for When Kara finds out She’s really going to live up to her nickname Kara golden retriever puppy Danvers 🥺 Knowing that Andrea didn’t treat Lena like the queen she is supposed to be makes me so angry 😡..but now she Has an Alpha who literally Worships the ground she walks on Their pup is going to be so lucky to have Parents like them & Big sisters Andrea is Just miserable It’s what I figured Just one knock out Kara just one is all she needs I definitely can’t wait until she finds out about the newest addition to Family 👀 again thank you for creating such amazing stories that just makes anyone’s day better especially mine 💜✨

I mean, I don't really mind if Kara's an angel with no flaws. Lena deserves her as such, and more. 💙

I Can’t wait for Lena to tell Kara she’s pregnant. I’m sure she’ll do it in a special way 😁 Kara is going to worship and take care of her every second of the pregnancy. I love how excited Kara got about the family vacation. She truly is the perfect mate. I’m so glad that you have so much more to tell of their story. I think we all love this story. I know I certainly do. 😁 As for Andrea, I hope she dies a painful, slow death.

So excited to for Lena and Kara. Can’t wait until Lena tells Kara about her pregnancy. I’m sure she’ll be ecstatic. I really loved the game night they all had. Of course these two horny idiots would find a way to have some alone time together. I really hope Andrea falls into a bottomless pit. This update was amazing I can’t wait to see how this progresses. Thank you for sharing. Hope you are staying safe and are well 💙❤️😊👍🏻👍🏻

Thank you so very much! 😁I think if Andrea is ever going to be likable/understood, it'll be a while away yet. There are people like Andrea out there, though, and that's the scary thing. Lena's healing and growth is very important to me and to the overall story. ❤️💙I'm just happy you enjoyed the balance of all of that!

Totally, Kara and Andrea have been presented as opposites of each other, because I really want this story to involve that for Lena, where she gets this amazing partner after so many difficulties. That's always going to be the core of this story, because I feel like everybody has experienced some form of toxic relationship (whether it be friendship or romantic) and it just devastates and lingers - so I wanted hopefulness, positivity, & Kara to be the true ideal partner for Lena. 😊Thank you, I was hoping the ending would be optimistic & sweet. ❤️💙

That's really awesome, because I feel like I haven't even made a dent in the story I want to tell yet! Thank you so much! 😁

Yeah, I'm looking forward to that too, and I'll be covering the whole pregnancy and beyond for them. 😊 Lena will get the opportunity to compare between her past & present with Kara. And I'm looking forward to bringing the kids back from boarding school and writing more family stuff. Thank you!

I'll be pretty surprised if I finish this story before reaching maybe 500,000 words, no exaggeration. I think I'm at approx. 150K right now, to give you an idea of what I have in mind. I'm not going to be time-jumping through Lena's pregnancy or their relationship, even if there are small jumps here or there. I even had an idea to write an AU of BOE where Lena and Kara are closer in age and Lena's in her bad relationship with Andrea when they meet. It's safe to say I'll be writing this story for a while and I might even do some random AUs of this verse. 😂Thank you, and basically, yes, I want to deliver everything you said! 💙

You're definitely right about all of this with regards to the POV being limited to Lena. She still has a bit to learn about Kara, and you're totally spot-on with the fact that Kara is an amazing mate, but she's a whole person, too - so yes, other aspects will be explored further down the line. I have A LOT of plans for this story and I'm nowhere near the end of it. Thank you very much for trusting in my storytelling process! 💙❤️

I'm going to get into some of them eventually! But I am definitely writing her as the ideal partner. 😊

Oh my gah you’re doing such a great job with this story. I swear to the gods I’ve never actually wanted to murder someone the way I do Andrea. If this wasn’t fiction it would be ON SIGHT for her 😡😡. Anyways, I just love how Lena is actually getting a chance to heal and evolve and grow between the bouts of sexy times. Thank you.

Thank you! There's still a while to go before any likable part of Andrea might shine through. Kara is and always will be a mensch with Lena. I debated holding off on the pregnancy, believe it or not, because there is a lot I want to explore for the couple, but they can still do all of that with a little one on the way. 😊Kara's reaction will be fun to write - coming soon.

Understandable, given all she's done. I've been thinking about this story in 3 parts, and Andrea won't start to evolve until approx... 2.3. We're still in part 1. 😊

I love this one purely because it sometimes feels like Kara’s almost too squeaky clean perfect as a great juxtaposition from Andrea’s moustasche curling villain of sorts. It’s like a movie where everything’s lovely and Lena can have the space to worth through her trauma at her pace with the love and support she deserves while also having all the wacky ups and downs having kids means. (Also it’s just so nice to live in fantasy given how messy their characters are in canon). This whole chapter just squeezed me in a hug especially the end with Natty and story time 💙💙

Rocket

All your work is great, but this one is such a joy to read. I could read these versions of the characters and this story for forever.

I'm curious as well. BOE is written from the perspective of Lena, the Kara we see is through Lena's eye. Given Lena's past experience and their relationship being new, Kara is perfect, wonderful by Lena's standard. I'm not saying Kara is not perfect or worderful, she is all of those and more. As their relationship matures, I do wonder if there will be other aspects being explored, the tension, the shadow, the trauma on both parties. But whatever cliterature decides to I do, it's going to be wonderful, and I'm just happy she continues to write this story :)

I'm excited to see Lena experience pregnancy with Kara this time around bec after everything she has gone through, she deserves to be loved and pampered so much T____T I'm also looking forward for the kids' reaction about this.

Honestly if you kept this story going in perpetuity I don’t think anyone would be mad 😂 in all seriousness, I love reading about Kara and Lena’s crazy antics and about how their relationship has grown and matured with time. I completely agree with Lena that Kara being so engaged in raising her kids is one of Kara’s most attractive qualities. I cannot wait to read Kara’s reaction to Lena’s pregnancy and I hope you continue this story just so we can see Kara doting on Lena throughout her pregnancy. Hopefully Lena can finally accept that she is worthy of all of the love that Kara gives her. Thanks for another wonderful chapter ❤️

I’m curious tho, what is Kara’s flaw? 🤔

I always forget that I need to Shift+Return. Addendum to previous comment: Despite my dislike of how selfish Andrea is, Kara is the absolute opposite and it's so wonderful watching her relationship with Lena grow. The confirmation of Lena's pregnancy was the opposite of a surprise, but it's so fantastic. Kara is going to be SO happy, and it's beautiful to watch Lena settle into the knowledge that she can trust in the happiness of her future.

I want to punt Andrea like a football 99% of the time, and this chapter was no exception.


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