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The Beauty of Experience - Chapter 10

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I hope Lena gets a new necklace. I hated this Andrea!!!

Kirstin Leigh McWhorter

Thank you! I strive to create many tasty scenes with this fic. 😊Andrea's behavior was super bad here and I loved writing the family moments! 💙❤️😁

Woah! Everything was great in this chap with the 🔥 tasty scenes😛 and Andrea being a dumb idiot. Love how the family was celebrating the mating bite. Lots off feels and thanks again. ❤❤🥰

Jbzq21

Thank you! 😊

Awesome 🔥🔥🔥

I have a lot of plans for this fic, so there's a lot of smut and fluff to come. I don't know how many chapters it will be, but it feels like I'm about 1/3rd of the way finished based on my plans. No exaggeration, it might end up being around 300k words when complete. 😂There will be more family bonding stuff in future chapters. Regarding Lex - most likely not? But -maybe.- Thank you!!

i have read some abo stuff way back when i was still in another fandom but let me say that this managed to put itself on top of my list. the smut is omg top tier but the fluff turns me into a puddle of useless goo. i’m excited for more kicking andrea rojas ass + maybe a luthor fam and kara bonding day? i also love the fact that lillian is decent here bec lena deserves more good people in her life. i was wondering if lex would make an appearance here? do you also have an idea how long this series would be? thank you for this again! it has been a wonderful read 💖

I did 😁. I really love this story I finish the chapters way to fast

Totally working on that and I have it all planned out! 🤓 I hope you enjoyed chap 10!

Thank you! 😊Including all of the family was not what I originally planned for this chapter but I'm glad it all worked out and conveyed Kara's acceptance. Haha, the scene with the necklace originally went a bit differently and that's why I needed the extra few days on the chapter to change some things around. 😺I'm happy you enjoyed and that you liked the touch with the shoe! ❤️💙 I hope you had a great week and that you have a lovely weekend! Stay safe and happy.

I’m so ready for the next chapter 😁

This chapter was phenomenal. I really enjoyed how all of the family accept Kara into their family and see that her and Lena’s relationship is something stable and loving. Of course Andrea had to act like spoiled entitled brat that she is. Gawd I wanted Kara to punch her when she ripped Lena’s necklace. But of course Kara being the noble and gentlewoman she is she just took the trash out and kept her shoe lmfao. Fantastic chapter. Hope you are staying safe and well. ❤️💙👍🏻🤩

Well, this comment is a blessing to me! Thank you! I could see Lillian and Sam being pals, bonding over their common dislike of Andrea. Alex and Sam will be around in the next chapter! Yeah, fondant is extremely sugary and kinda tastes like the dye, I imagined good cake for Sophia = expensive and decorative, haha, since she has Andrea's tastes.

This is your favorite series? Wow, I'm beyond honored! Thank you! To be honest, I totally over planned for this chapter but I felt like there were a lot of important developments that needed to happen -- for Sophia, + bringing the whole family together - so I'm very glad you liked all of that! Is it odd that I have a whole plan of where I want the story to take Andrea, too? Hearing that you love my writing more with each story made my whole day - thank you!! ❤️

Lmao. I know someone who watches a lot of baking shows where fondant is used for decoration so I was just like, "yeah this is a kid who watches baking on TV but probably doesn't bake stuff. She likes things to look a certain way because of Andrea's influence and prob doesn't care about taste." 😂Andy really likes Kara and Sophia's making progress on it, for sure. I'm happy you liked the party with everyone and then Andrea getting kicked out! Thank you so very much!

Kara is going to casually display that shoe like a trophy. Lol, just kidding. 😺 I imagined Andrea falling off her shoes and then picking them up to use as weapons, and I almost had Kara give the shoe back to her... but. 😁 Thank you so much! I'm really enjoying writing this one and it makes me truly happy to hear you're loving everything that's gone into it!

Thank you!! It makes me really happy to hear that the story was a pleasant thing to look forward to after work. ❤️

Thank you very much!! 😁Yeah, Lillian's like, you're free of Andrea - let's treat this like a national holiday. It's been interesting writing the kids and their mix of personalities playing off Kara. Def want to add more Kara scenes with the kids in future chapters. I had to make some changes to that fight scene before posting - Andrea's behaviors were a little bit worse in the original. 😂

What a blessing this chapter is. Loved it so much. Lillian and Sam conspiring and Kara kicking Andrea out of the house. Lena will undoubtedly be pregnant soon and Alex and Sam will.... we'll see. And the fondant over butter cream? Well no. Not gonna happen. Even if American cakes are way too sweet for my taste. Doesn't matter if butter cream or pure sugar ;-)

My absolute favourite series is back and this is potentially my favourite chapter yet. You’ve truly outdone yourself with this one; Sophia slowly opening up and accepting herself as an omega, Alex’s full introduction (like everyone else, I’m curious to see where her and Sam goes, as well as hearing more about Kara’s youth/pre-Lena life) and Sam and Lillian’s personalities. Andrea’s complete meltdown and further evidence that Kara is her foil? Chef’s kiss. I fall more in love with your writing with everything you release, keep up the fantastic work and I can’t wait to see what’s in store next! 💙

I actually said the words “FONDANT OVER BUTTERCREAM WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS CHILD” so thanks for that lovely laugh. Gosh this whole thing was perfect - from Andy and Sophie immediately accepting Kara to the party (ALEX AND SAM!! HELLO!!!) and Lillian being so so great. And then Kara FINALLY got to throw Andrea out HA! Triumph!! Great great job you knocked it out of the park

Rocket

“I’m keeping this,” Kara stated after a moment just to spite Andrea as she climbed out of the bush with a crazed look in her eye. “Have fun driving home with just one shoe.” I bout died at this. The embarrassment of writing a check your ass can't cash then being forced to drive home halfway shoeless was absolutely hilarious. I love the mix of comedy and romance in this fic. The story you have crafted between these two in BoE is just the best. Thank you for another masterpiece!

Thank you! Made work that bit bearable when I saw this notification :D loved it xx great chapter.

Saints above that was phenomenal! I love Lillian in this, she’s pitch perfect. The party was beautiful and it’s so awesome how much Kara and the kids love and accept each other. I gotta say I was hoping for a broken jaw for Andrea but I’m sure she’ll get the pummeling she so richly deserves. When she snatched off Lena’s necklace I wanted to fight. It’s on sight for Andrea Rojas. On 👏🏾sight 👏🏾


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