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All in the Risk - Part 1

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I've thoroughly enjoyed writing part 2, to be honest. I'm still messing with the last scene... so your fix is on the way, maybe late tonight or at worst, tomorrow!

UNF this story is still sooooo amazing on reread 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵You got me like a coke addict up here trying to get a fix😳😳😳🤷🏾‍♀️

You've totally assessed Michael well! Total beta. He's completely neglectful of Lena and she deserves better, and so does Kara. At least they have each other now. :)

I think they are going to have a lot of late night adventures 🥰

I love how Lena just say Fuck it and risk it all with Kara. Kara rock her world nicely. Love it. Her sex life is too sad with Michael like how the hell did she survived? It is just sad for an omega to have almost zero sex life, like she will die when she enters heat. Probably not satisfying at all to if her husband did help cause I start to think he is a dead fish in bed XD. I don't know but l Michael feels like a beta to me, he don't care for anything but work and only bathing in happiness when people are jealous of him. Like he doesn't have enough confidence and need it to make him feel big. Don't know but it's pretty childish lol.

Straight up request things! (This goes for everyone - seriously, just send me a message and your wants will appear on polls and/or in stories if they work for a particular story. I guarantee there are other people who are also interested in the same things). I think Lena and Kara sat there for a long time talking... like all afternoon and part of the night, so they were drunk off and on... but not at the 'carry-me' level. Lmao.

Ayyyy thank you 🙏 too tier patron who requested this story. I’m usually too shy to just straight up request a netorare story, so thanks 😆😆 the build up to the act was great, per usual. That sexual tension was 🔥🔥🔥 it made the payoff sooo good. Also the bit about them drinking 4 Hurricanes made me lol... last time I drank 2 of those I had to be bodily carried through Bourbon street 😆 thanks for the steamy time !!!

Sappho82

One of the great things about ABO is you can pretty much make up a bunch of rules and they can be different across different fics. I love exploring the different possibilities. Yes, I've thought about writing Alpha Lena and you'll actually see 2 fics with an Alpha Lena this month if all goes according to plan. :)

Kind of new to the ABO world and I really am intrigued about how Kara presents when she’s in rut vs non. I’d never read that before— it’s lovely. I love the duality. Also all aboard the bashing on Michael train!!! P.S. have you ever thought of writing Lena as Alpha? Doesn’t seem like there’s lots of that out there. But I would definitely vote for that if you were writing it.

I feel like this probably lends itself well to a shorter follow-up chapter with a few scenes.. so I might be able to squeeze it in at some point between other things. :)

I'm reading the comments and I'm all in favor Michael walks in on them lol.🤣 A possible continuation of a mate Supercorp pair just flexing at Michaels dumb ass neglectful undeserving self. The smut was so delicious I which I can taste it.🤣

Jbzq21

I love the idea of this too! Lmao. Thank you!

My god this was sinful! So good. Please continue. I need a sceme of Michael mocking Kara or using her name wrong again and then when he walks in on them knotted he then gets her name right! Haha This was amazing and I'm always a sucker for mated supercorp.

I laughed out loud reading this. That's perfect.

If there's anything I can say about myself as a writer, it's that I loveee a continuation.

Let’s just say this one had me sweating. I do hope you plan to continue cuz frankly all I want is for michael to walk in on them while Kara is knotted in her and for Lena to be like, divorce papers are on the console.

I can't see your emojis on this and I really want to, haha.

You wanted submissions? How about you continue with this story? My f* God. So hot. So many feelings. It deserves a mated pair of Supercorp in the end. Pretty please.

Alright, alright, alright. I’m fine. I’m totally fine. 🥵🥵🥵