End Simulation - Chapter 5

Thank you!! I kinda make things up and slightly different in every abo I do, in the way of rules/how things work. I had a total different jealousy scenario worked out/half-written, but then went with this one, and if it was effective, that is awesome. Plot moving will continue to happen adjacent with the smut. Thank you, I really love hearing your thoughts!

Thank you! Working through her resentments/issues will be important.

I did consider whether or not to have Lena be more.. self-aware in this chapter, but I think it's important that she isn't yet. I don't know why I like using Andrea to incite jealousy but I do, haha. Alex means well and I really like her character, but I think I could do some interesting things with her part going forward. Happy that you felt the chapter was balanced with smut and plot, thank you!

Goodness gracious. Thank you for this incredible chapter. This is what I call a smorgasboard chapter...there's so many different things to chew on! The smut of course was very hot and top notch. Whew. I really loved the mate bite part...i liked your description of the physiology of that. And of course when they just go ham in that office...lmao that was great. Lena's jealousy was so delicious...but it was extra effective but it seemed so visceral. And you moved the plot forward in really significant ways, too. Interesting to see how incorporated the whole thing with Obsidian tech and such. Anyway a big thank you for this great chapter!

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Great chapter! Love kara claiming Lena. I hope Lena starts to work through her resentments soon—she is her own worst enemy.

My gosh this is super hot! I feeling like the boiling point of the volcano and need Mr. Freeze cold gun to cool me down. It seems Lena is still proceeding with her plan. I'm thinking it will back fire and prolong the angst if she uses it on Kara. Lena is still clearly mad but still staking claim on Kara anyway. Bad Andrea...no Kryptonian for you. Lena plan work in the end. Don't want her on her bad side Andrea. Alex should stop trying meddle cause it doesn't help that her judgment fucks over Kara and especially Lena. I can wait until what happens next. I'm never disappointed. Great balance between the smut and story. Thanks again.

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