Feng Shui Engineering Chapters 24.5 - 25
Added 2023-10-14 23:15:46 +0000 UTCChapters 24.5-25 of "Reach Heaven Via Feng Shui Engineering, Drug Trade And Tax Evasion" which you can read in full here. It is intended to be somewhat similar to "The Martian" in a xianxia setting, focusing on magical engineering, sect building, as well as the politics and economics of sects.
As usual, this is a draft version of the chapters available to patrons, and it can change between now and when it is released to everyone else.
Next three chapters of the Summoned Hero will come out on Patreon as soon as I do another editing pass on them, so maybe in the next couple hours.
I'd appreciate people's thoughts about the author note at the beginning of the interlude - is it better to include it to give people context, or would it come off as too apologetic?
Comments
Hmmm I don't think the context is bad, but I don't think I'm the target for the context. Having read the original title, I was instead wondering when it was going to get to the drug trade and tax evasion part, and actually really liked the shift away from the World Fragment. In regards to the interlude part, I don't think it's necessary to clarify what you're specifically doing (setting up tension), as the interlude still feels very tied to Qian Shanyi, as it's jumping to a direct (if timeskipped) result of her actions.
Seno
2023-10-15 04:20:15 +0000 UTC
