Feng Shui Engineering Ch 20-21
Added 2023-09-03 20:08:08 +0000 UTCChapters 20-21 of "Reach Heaven Via Feng Shui Engineering, Drug Trade And Tax Evasion" which you can read in full here. It is intended to be somewhat similar to "The Martian" in a xianxia setting, focusing on magical engineering, sect building, as well as the politics and economics of sects.
As usual, this is a draft version of the chapters available to patrons, and it can change between now and when it is released to everyone else.
Some big revisions have happened since I last posted to Patreon. First of all, I added a prologue to the story, which you can read here. I didn't post it separately to Patreon since it was a part of an overall rewrite of the early chapters of the story, where I de-emphasized the temporary amnesia suffered by Qian Shanyi, only making her forget the last few days, not her overall past. I don't know how many of my patrons are otherwise subscribed to story updates elsewhere, so perhaps you already know this.
Secondly, I rewrote chapters 17-19, to make Qian Shanyi troll a bit less and make Yonghao somewhat more proactive. You can read the changes in the same google document as before.
Overall not a lot of writing done over the past few weeks, due to a combination of needing to move flats on a tight time schedule, and being on a family holiday. We'll see if I'll be back to a more productive rate over the next week.
