The Gray's Secret: Mini-Release 48
Added 2024-10-07 14:40:43 +0000 UTChttps://leadvone.com/the-grays-secret-scene-48/
Alex vs. Lord Black - Part 1
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Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate not all the characters will be everyone's cup of tea, but I've made a note regardless.
LeadVonE
2024-10-09 14:35:24 +0000 UTCLooking forward to it!
Finnspa23
2024-10-09 14:34:52 +0000 UTCPlanning to do more detailed events with larger time skips in between. Maybe 1 day to 1 week events that constitute a 'book' and then a jump in time. Not sure how many books in a school year, but we'll see π.
LeadVonE
2024-10-09 14:33:56 +0000 UTCThanks! That does bring the (maybe) obvious question to mind... Do you expect larger time skips as the story progresses beyond the Gray's Secret? I'm of two minds when it comes to this story. 1) is that the attention to detail and intricate plots are phenomenal making me enjoy every moment of it. 2) is that probably natural impatience to know how it ends π I guess that's the trade-off though between well thought out and rushed.
Finnspa23
2024-10-09 14:07:11 +0000 UTCThere was quite a big jump in time between the very first post and the first day of the Wizengamot, but if we're just talking about the Wizengamot, then yes, this is still day one.
LeadVonE
2024-10-09 13:59:37 +0000 UTCI'm trying to follow/remember the timeline here but has the Gray's Secret only been one day so far? Or at least since the first mini release?
Finnspa23
2024-10-09 13:56:48 +0000 UTCAh, Daddy-Daughter bonding . Reminds me of sparring and grappling with my teenage kids in Karate and BJJ classes. They could always turn their effort up against me, because no matter how hard they hit me, I'd still have to love them. I'm hoping this can be a good way for Alex and Sirius to re-connect. Talking about dueling can lead to talking about other stuff. It's obvious the two stopped communicating at some point.
Chris Myers
2024-10-08 01:04:02 +0000 UTCLiked the fight and content but I find myself liking Alexandra less and less. It feels like she's losing maturity as she gets more power. You'd think she'd have the smarts to look at the legacy of the Black's and her father's well cautioned fear for her and be like, 'hm, maybe dad has a point' Love the story, wouldn't be here if I didn't, but it's my honest thoughts
CaptainFlowers
2024-10-07 16:37:58 +0000 UTC
