The Gray's Secret: Mini-Release 38
Added 2024-07-23 04:45:20 +0000 UTCI'm back from my trip!
https://leadvone.com/the-grays-secret-scene-38/
"Escalation"
Enjoy!
Comments
Thank you for the feedback! It was very helpful.
LeadVonE
2024-07-26 07:52:10 +0000 UTC"Ted Tonks" (stupid spell-check)
Chris Myers
2024-07-26 02:52:29 +0000 UTC"Andromeda" (stupid spell-check)
Chris Myers
2024-07-26 02:51:09 +0000 UTCTed Tonka must be an exceptional wizard to woo Andromida
Chris Myers
2024-07-26 02:49:16 +0000 UTCSo I'm a fan of the current content drops and what you're aiming for here, but I can't help but feel its ... mistimed/misplaced within the current chapter/arc. There's so much going on with all the different meetings and rulings, that combined with this, just inflates it a bit too much. I would save Alex and Narcissa's story/convo for a separate chapter, but, that's just me. A memory flashback in the middle of all this takes me out of it.
CaptainFlowers
2024-07-23 13:58:12 +0000 UTC
