Mini Cafe 24 (end)
Added 2023-07-23 06:41:36 +0000 UTCtext:
"Well, ladies, thank you for the drink and show. But I have to get back to work now."
"Thank you for coming, Master! Have a great day!"
it's over. I learned that I can't do more wholesome-ish content. an attempt was made.
I think I will focus more on what I like, which is teasing/bullying shrinking girls and more horny.
if you have any questions about this series, feel free to ask me.
Comments
Great work on first comic. I can't wait for one that focuses more on constant shrinking
Moodson
2023-07-25 21:56:00 +0000 UTCthis was really cute, i liked it
Dovah
2023-07-25 04:12:30 +0000 UTCthanks, glad to hear that! taking it as a learning opportunity makes me feel better about.
ink
2023-07-24 08:09:21 +0000 UTCIt sounds like you learned a lot, and we got an excellent comic out of it. I don't see any downsides here. You did a great job on this, and I'm looking forward to the next thing.
Iron Chef Tonberry
2023-07-24 05:53:43 +0000 UTCyea, that's what I usually do. setup a couple of checkpoints or situations I want to get to in the comic and just try to natural advance the characters towards that. but here it was just like maid cafe talking about your day and all that wholesome stuff, girlfriend experience, which would involve more writing which I really don't like to do.
ink
2023-07-23 21:47:19 +0000 UTCThat's fair, I mainly mean in the sense of having a general guideline of what you want the overall story to be so you can keep is as lewd/safe as you go. Either way, I wouldn't overthink you, you do great work so just do what you enjoy.
Chabble
2023-07-23 20:37:50 +0000 UTCthanks, I just don't think I can make something planned out for constant updates. like the way I did the other comic that I fully released for the doujin collab was work on the pages out of order, sometimes I would draw the finish the last pages, then some in the beginning and some in the middle. it would be as if I posted Mini Cafe 20 before pages 17, 18, 19. this was a great learning experience though!
ink
2023-07-23 20:22:28 +0000 UTCthanks!
ink
2023-07-23 20:17:18 +0000 UTCI mean, when you start a comic about naked tiny girls lactating into people's coffee, it's not going to be 100% "wholesome", at least not in the traditional sense. Now, I'd say as far as lewd stuff goes, this one is like... wholesomely lewd", but yeah, if you want to make something that is completely wholesome, I feel like you'd have to plan that out from the very start. All that aside, this was still a very good comic and I enjoyed it a lot, looking forward to what you make next.
Chabble
2023-07-23 14:19:05 +0000 UTCi think you did a good job ink don’t beat yourself up :3
Jackie
2023-07-23 07:16:58 +0000 UTC
