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HS REWRITE PEER REVIEW REQUEST 2!

I am looking for peer review on HOMESTUCK ALTERNATE UNIVERSE ACT 2.  

If you're interested, feel free to check out this, the first draft for Act 2 in its entirety.  

What I'm looking for: 

-Comments 

-Concerns

 -Questions 

-Critique  

What I'm not looking for: 

-Typo proofreading (lol)

 -Telling me how you think the project sucks 

-Critique on lack of images (there will be a visual component later on)  

Anyone is free to comment on the document in Google Docs OR in the new channel hs-rewrite.



LINK: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1wWnySJON0Rqx3dy_ogDAPZCR-t9czGwS 


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