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Outsider page 179

"When the lights... go on... in the citay..."

This _is_ all going somewhere... you'll just have to trust me. :D

Outsider page 179

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might just be a planetary ring system.... orbital ice particles, usually. it looks a little too fuzzy to be a single discreet structure. Or it could be some sort of cloud-based wake from lots of vehicles traveling through a ground-to-space launch corridor.

Ronald Homer

That thing in the sky look like a megastructure, an orbital ring circumfereing the entire planet! Isaac Arthur on YouTube have several episodes about megastructures, including orbital rings. πŸ™‚

Michael Pettersson

Alex got his troll face on in panel 2!

GhostlyYorick

Fireblade is finally opening up to social stuff!

Bee

It's nice to see that even Fireblade has a softer side, and occasionally eases up to enjoy the view. I'm impressed with the expressions, too: you're getting across a lot of feeling :)

Niall Hedderley

I like this page. Story progression or not, it (and the previous) are establishing setting and personality on more than a 2d level.

Kuratenshi

With this page, I like Red a lot more now. Depending on where this goes she might be put next to Spiral on my favorites list.

Badminton

Beautiful!

GhostlyYorick

It's amazing how much personality and expression you can give to a character who never says a word!

TokenAussie

Wow you finished that more quickly than I expected. Keep up the fine work; that last panel is especially beautiful (I can see why Fireblade would hang out there).

Morgan Olson

might? they are all best girl.

Anthony Docimo

now they're all going to take their human to these places. (what, i can dream) surprised Fireblade didn't "say" that she never signed up to take part in the game. (that or "is this a discussion or a game?") fantastic page, lots of fun looks and conversations. YAY Fireblade backstory!

Anthony Docimo

I love this story, been following it for years now. Hope to see more of the differences between humans and our all female alien cast.

keemperor

I'm glad to see all the character backstory and to get a better understanding of them.

I really like the how things are progressing, keep up the great work!

Will C.

Never apologise for taking time to build up a character, this is great!

Highlanderwolf

Lots of character in Fireblade's expressions. She might just become best girl.

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