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Action Packed Love: Bubblegum (Page 1)

I would appreciate your feedback on the composition of the image and the coloring. Im looking forward to improving for the project!

Hope you like the page!

Action Packed Love: Bubblegum  (Page 1)

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I wanted to go for an artistic route with this page, but i could have done it a lot better. Probably it would be better to erase small pudding if it gets too confusing! Thank you a lot for the feedback c:

Plaga

I think the front view of Caroline should be cropped to just her head, otherwise it looks like she's existing in two places at once. Other than that, awesome coloring and a good start to the comic.

Karakuri

Coloring's solid~

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