Action Packed Love: Bubblegum (Page 1)
Added 2017-03-15 00:17:11 +0000 UTCI would appreciate your feedback on the composition of the image and the coloring. Im looking forward to improving for the project!
Hope you like the page!
Comments
I wanted to go for an artistic route with this page, but i could have done it a lot better. Probably it would be better to erase small pudding if it gets too confusing! Thank you a lot for the feedback c:
Plaga
2017-03-17 05:05:33 +0000 UTCI think the front view of Caroline should be cropped to just her head, otherwise it looks like she's existing in two places at once. Other than that, awesome coloring and a good start to the comic.
Karakuri
2017-03-16 09:47:04 +0000 UTCColoring's solid~
Nopast
2017-03-15 03:29:30 +0000 UTC
