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Early Access: STORMWEAVER 3 - Chapter 50 + THE STORY SO FAR [ROUGH]

Gonna reread this tomorrow and see if I like where it's wrapping. I get the feeling what I wanted to be 51 will need to be layered into this, but we'll see!

Enjoy!

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REMINDER: BOOK 3 CONTENT/SPOILERS ARE NOT TO BE MENTIONED OUTSIDE OF CHAPTER LEAK ANNOUNCEMENT POSTS. THANK YOU FOR UNDERSTANDING.

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A FEW RULES & REMINDERS:

Comments

Chapter 41 has an edit. When Samus asks Senson who broke the desk he now gives a technically it was Selleck answer before being coerced into revealing it was Grant. lol. I love that!

Garret Bazurto

Hey guys I don't know if this has already been put out, but Bryce actually did a lot of little edits and adds that I noticed in chapters 44-49..only in the 1-50 doc though. We get to see Rei tell Aria to contact Sarah, and a glimpse of a draft of Sarah in combat training with some of Bryces musings. There is also an expanded convo between Viv and Aria at the end of 44 and Rei's 1st fight with Kay is fleshed out a bit. Anyway, enjoy!

Brandon King

Not much mention of chancery till the end. Hope she gets something good

ded 23

Rei needs to tell her no. I’m sure that’s going to be a major point in the plot of later books, his ‘Enders Game’ shut down but I want him to do it now. TODAY.

Destinee Singleton

Rei needs to tell her no. I’m sure that’s going to be a major point in the plot of later books, his ‘Enders Game’ shut down but I want him to do it now. TODAY.

Destinee Singleton

with it becoming obvious to everyone that Shido is behind the accelerated advancement of the other firesong members, do we think that splitting them up would now be off the table? Or would Abel be thinking that she could take Rei and Shido to team them up with other top ranking cadets (from Sol?) hoping to replicate the effect?

Peter Whitfield

I didn’t even think about it when I first read it. I just thought it probably wasn’t something Rei heard in the din of combat. But I think you are right. It would make sense that he used a voiceless command to activate overclock.

Garret Bazurto

I am betting that Shido gives Abel two middle fingers and delays any upgrades this whole show. She’s gonna be pissed!

Xien

Yo, did logan, just low key, do a voiceless activation of overclock??!!

Brandon King

Agreed. But I also can’t bring my self to hate her. As much as I dislike her disposition and how she acts with disregard to people’s well being I understand why she does it. Good character for sure

anders

It seems abel is hoping to force a stat jump.

Anthony nunya

Another enjoyable chapter. It is great to see Rei vs Chancery and Logan in a 2v1. Man I dislike Abel so much. I know she is pushing them because of the war, and probably trying to see if she can get Chancery or Logan to have an evolution or change. But the way she does it drives me crazy. Bryce, well done in creating a character that can illicit such a reaction.

Garret Bazurto

I mean, this is all speculation, and Bryce is writing the story, but... Probably part of the motivation, but I doubt the only motivation. She probably also wants to see how much grit they can all show as future soldiers in the war. I could probably think of a dozen or so other things she's trying to determine, not the least of which is if her gamble with making them push to stay at Galens is more effective than just forcing the transfer and sending the message that it had better be, if they don't want that outcome. Most people reading this are probably thinking about this from the school mindset, but these are essentially military cadets, and extremely valuable assets for the military with this particular group of cadets. So, Abel is likely not just sizing them up, but also sending a message to the brass in charge of their training, 'THIS is what I expect. Stop treating them like children.'... But again, that's a guess based on context Bryce has given, so unless Bryce spells it out more clearly, take it as only speculation.

Jacob Hopkins

is she pushing them like that thinking Chancery and Logan will evolve?

saynt


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