Early Access: STORMWEAVER 3 - Chapter 41 [ROUGH]
Added 2025-08-10 18:19:22 +0000 UTCComments
"antagonist plot armor to drag out the storylines" is a great way to put it! I definitely get sick of that trope, so I agree that this chapter is sooo refreshing.
Nicholaus
2025-09-24 12:05:37 +0000 UTCwe're gonna get there, not to worry haha. i will need ways to challenge him later on
Wraithmarked Creative
2025-09-03 15:46:09 +0000 UTCOne thing I’ve been thinking about.. why hasn’t Rei trained against Firesong without his CAD or learned a partial call? I feel like that should be a regular part of his training at this point.
Thunderbug
2025-08-31 14:17:43 +0000 UTCHe explained he’ll be busy through the end of this month.
Thunderbug
2025-08-27 10:46:02 +0000 UTCIs Bryce ok? He normally posts something. I want the next chapter but not at the expense of his health.
Daniel Posey
2025-08-27 03:59:48 +0000 UTCI feel the same. I keep checking multiple times a day in case there is any update. I am so looking forward to the next chapter.
Garret Bazurto
2025-08-26 19:25:15 +0000 UTCMy brain is itching for chapter 42, Hopefully this week!!
Bean
2025-08-26 04:15:08 +0000 UTCI'm wondering if the hole team will get personalised or 1 off abilities like type shift and vivs ability . Or is it just the shard thing with the upgraded or full body cad they get?
NotHereTo FuckSpiders
2025-08-24 14:13:23 +0000 UTCI honestly want there to be some kind of end of the year exhibition match or something. Where Rei gets to pick his opponent and ends up calling Selleck and his merry minions for a 5 on 1 rematch. With all the teachers being like "That goes against every rule we stand for. Sure why not?"
Matthew Ferguson
2025-08-24 09:38:57 +0000 UTC42 when bryce i need it
oscar
2025-08-21 07:17:01 +0000 UTCI absolutely love the fact that the instructor read the situation correctly. I love how she handled it. And truthfully I think Logan did show restraint a lot of restraint he is growing immensely. I don't think he would have handled that the same way before . Definitely would have been involved physical injury as opposed to just destruction of property. And I think that that's the reason he didn't get punished more severely. I also like that this shows another person who's in Captain Dents corner. She knew something was going to go down the second they stepped into that classroom and forewarned the teacher beforehand.
Dartanian Phillips
2025-08-15 00:15:39 +0000 UTCIt would be very interesting to see the cadets go up against the archons in a simulated combat experience. After all, isn’t that what these cadets are being trained to fight? I think the idea in fire and song of having neutral enemies in the various simulations, it’s actually a good one. Just my opinion.
Tim Kilgore
2025-08-14 21:19:43 +0000 UTCI took some time to think about it and here’s what I love about this chapter. The protagonists get to fight back. One of the tropes I hate in most books/movies is that the protagonist ALWAYS has to take the high road otherwise the boss/media/teachers/peers alienate them. Rei and team just have to take it while Selleck, Sidorov, Reed, other students take it out on them. The instructors letting the team take it as far as the others are taking it just seems fair. They’re soldiers not saints. Let them fight it out. Otherwise it’s just antagonist plot armor to drag out the storylines. Thanks for flipping this on its head!
TB
2025-08-14 16:46:35 +0000 UTCStenson should tell the Capitan that it was technically Selleck who broke the desk, seeing as he's the one who crashed into them and all.
Grant
2025-08-14 07:35:51 +0000 UTCLet’s all remember some of these people did not in fact earn their cad on merit and are just experiments for Mind’s algorithm.
Decorus
2025-08-13 19:49:00 +0000 UTCThank you for the sneak peak at this chapter, it was very enjoyable to read I enjoy the way you are showing growth in Logan, with the base personality being shown as well as the continued growth and control that is being made by this character. To me this is the most organic growth of any in the main character group. I would like to see, either at the beginning of this chapter or in the future, the impact and growth of Catchwick's evolution. These explorations of growth are one of the things I believe you incredibly well. I always look forward to the chapters dedicated to the tactics and strategies of the team and how they all work together Again thanks for the rough chapter and look forward to the next
Mike Gilbert
2025-08-13 16:59:47 +0000 UTCI was thinking the same thing while reading it. I was like come on Sense, give me the technically it was Selleck with an assist from Grant.
Garret Bazurto
2025-08-13 01:45:43 +0000 UTCWatch it cost the price of a car
Tox
2025-08-12 20:35:30 +0000 UTCIt would have been cool for catchers shard to have somehow conveyed not just danger but location…. So far all (All?) the shards have been seen to do is convey danger (Viv and catcher) and enhance growth. Which is great, don’t get me wrong! But some form of communication (telepathy!) would be … we’ll talk about team building!
Scott
2025-08-12 20:15:40 +0000 UTChey bryce ik its a little late to ask but i just had a question about how music works with noeds like does it just project into their ears or are headphones still a thing? idk why i thought of this i just did ok
oscar
2025-08-12 04:12:34 +0000 UTCI wonder how much those desks cost... 🤔
Aubrey Listi
2025-08-12 04:09:28 +0000 UTCThe only change Id LIKE to see is when sense is asked that he say "Well, Technically Selleck is the one who hit the desks..." 😂
Aubrey Listi
2025-08-12 04:07:38 +0000 UTCI mean, one could argue Selleck was the one to break those desks…
George Sierra
2025-08-11 23:52:56 +0000 UTCI love Samsus hitting Selleck from the soldier perspective. It gives such a “bigger picture” view of the mess he’s creating and hands him a sign of “get your shit together”….though I doubt the idiot takes it
RickVaughn14
2025-08-11 23:50:47 +0000 UTCIt’s so funny you say this because Selleck is far from untouchable, he’s slightly above average at best. Like remind me again but wasn’t he skipped over for Valormade and Red Crown too. lol
Warlord
2025-08-11 21:43:35 +0000 UTCOooh. Shido out here spreading seeds as it do. But Catcher second? Clearly he needs the boost to catch up with Sarah.... let the shipping commence. And yeeeah, dat smackdown.... gonna be satisfying in the final version too
Ben Nikel
2025-08-11 17:22:17 +0000 UTCAgreeeed. Satisfying. At the start of the chapter, I didn't quite get the why of the "at the price of Grant's wallet," but when it got down to the punishment... and then the bit on the disposition of rats... something that would normally be a whispered threat, said to the entire room... Mmmmm. Tingly.
Ben Nikel
2025-08-11 17:20:02 +0000 UTCYes! Okay this is going to be one of my favorite chapters
Maria Klein
2025-08-11 15:52:43 +0000 UTCTalk about bubble busting… and redefining success. In Selleck and Sidorovs universe they see themselves as untouchable… and impervious … Selleck and Truant get reintroduced to reality. What happens to sidorovs cronies who squealed? Sweet.
Xien
2025-08-11 14:50:32 +0000 UTCGood chapter. Seeing Sellick getting his fair share of beating is always a treat. And the little bit with the Officer kicking him too (not literally)... well in regard what the MIND had mentioned last chapter and Dent (and Able knows) yeah Sellick won't last on the frontline one moment.
Dragons'Sheppard1995
2025-08-11 10:00:35 +0000 UTCSo nice to see Grant on the good side. I want to see him get Selek in a match! That would make Grant so happy! He would tear that poor kid to pieces. Literally! 😂
Bill Hilliard
2025-08-11 04:05:35 +0000 UTCOutstanding chapter!!! The officers solidarity, as to the life lessons of survival was profound and utterly true in this world and the cadets world. This book is a work of art. Look forward to the next evolution of Rei and Firesong’s continued growth towards the Nightmare Fighters they are destined to become. Thanks Bryce!
Dan
2025-08-11 03:29:41 +0000 UTCVery good, I really like how the staff are saying we can't prove it but we know that you are in this group, while we allow some stuff as a military school, there are lines and they are not to be crossed. Yes Blue Falcons, enjoy point position, and other spots in the direct line of fire. Typically without any support.
Hope
2025-08-11 03:23:28 +0000 UTCFantastic message about what happens on the front lines. Love the intensity.
Jon Slack
2025-08-11 03:18:56 +0000 UTCReally liked that we had a moment of the teachers taking a moment to highlight that while they do let some stuff slide that their are very clear limits while also pointing out that ultimately they are a military academy training them to fight. So stunts like what Selleck pulled are the kind of thing that get either themselves or other people killed. Kind of highlights why it's also not surprising to learn that MIND has been more lax with the third test of late because you see some of these people with some issue that you'd think would qualify them for rejection.
Voror
2025-08-11 01:33:16 +0000 UTCSolid chapter and shows great growth for Logan. Good stuff. Would like Samsus to remind everyone that this isn't high school, but a military academy as a part of the rant, but its excellent.
Matt O'Connor
2025-08-11 01:06:21 +0000 UTCThat was Glorious!
Jared Plunkett
2025-08-10 23:53:57 +0000 UTCOkay Samsus just became one of my favorite teachers.
Andrew Foster
2025-08-10 23:46:30 +0000 UTC"Mr. A-Rank daddy" is GOLD.
Todd Smith
2025-08-10 23:18:34 +0000 UTCThat was a horrible & wonderful (horribly wonderful?) bait & switch. I was prepared for angst over Logan's anger issues after the sneak peek. Well played, sir!
Todd Smith
2025-08-10 23:10:39 +0000 UTCOMG! Chapter 41 was sheer perfection1😆 Thanks!
Dee
2025-08-10 21:49:07 +0000 UTCSAMSUS FOR THE WIN!!!!
Time to Sleep
2025-08-10 21:35:54 +0000 UTCFINALLY YES
oscar
2025-08-10 20:11:24 +0000 UTCI am a teacher and I wish that I could do this to students who pretend that they have no idea why another student lost it on them.
Emily Stuart
2025-08-10 20:08:19 +0000 UTCAwesome!!
Heather Herren
2025-08-10 20:04:05 +0000 UTCHahaha that was so awesome. True if you backstab your fellow soldiers don't expect them to help you on the front lines.
Aerich Rea
2025-08-10 19:52:41 +0000 UTCCan confirm, Blue Falcon aka B.F. aka Buddy Fucker.
Andrew Lahr
2025-08-10 19:51:22 +0000 UTCI can see how the school would allow some antagonistic behavior that would allow beneficial development of character... But when pushed too far that can become detrimental to development. Deep down in my soul I think Samsus would have liked to have taken Logan's position to take her frustrations out on Selleck. By not brigging him and only making him pay for the desks... perfect. And letting Selleck know that they know what kind of character he is.... Delicious. Excellent writing as always Bryce thank you! 🙂
Sherry
2025-08-10 19:43:22 +0000 UTCThat is a solid and hilarious chapter. My colleagues are wondering why I'm laughing at the desk. Looking forward to the next one!
Zac
2025-08-10 19:36:23 +0000 UTCThat was absolutely fanatic and I am here for all of it!
Kirivina
2025-08-10 19:33:10 +0000 UTC"Ma'ma" Sense saluted "That would be Cadet Selleck's mouth ma'ma assisted by Cadet Grant." - Reads fine the way it is but I think this would be funnier.
Cam Musser
2025-08-10 19:17:17 +0000 UTCThat was cathartic
Tobias Hammeken Arboe
2025-08-10 19:13:07 +0000 UTCOooh I'll Google this thanks!
Wraithmarked Creative
2025-08-10 19:09:09 +0000 UTCI love seeing a story where the teachers are 100% biased but they have every reason to be. It always bothers me when the antagonist gets away simply due to no proof or they’re the top dog. Seeing Selleck get publicly embarrassed is soooo cathartic
Warlord
2025-08-10 19:03:27 +0000 UTCOh. Is that all?” the captain asked dryly, like she suddenly couldn’t have cared less. “I thought it was something important.” Best reaction ever. I can just picture all the cadets going slack jaw.
Nicolaus Fountain
2025-08-10 18:58:18 +0000 UTCStone. Cold. And I love it. Really hammering in Dent's point without her even being there. Can't wait to see where the book goes next!!
Shipwright
2025-08-10 18:58:10 +0000 UTCIf I was Sense I would have said technically it was Sellick's back.
DeadKing Valas
2025-08-10 18:57:22 +0000 UTCGreat stuff. Might I suggest a slight alteration to Samsus’ speech, instead of “rats and backstabbers” use “rats and blue falcons” which is a military term for buddy fucker, seems pretty fitting
Dirty Dibbler
2025-08-10 18:56:21 +0000 UTCThe shiz just got real lol
James Rountree
2025-08-10 18:54:03 +0000 UTCNOOO! Rei needs an upgrade! PLZ!😭
Bea Mostert
2025-08-10 18:49:38 +0000 UTCLoved! Felt like the favorite “have a biscuit Potter” scene!!
Devin Jaros
2025-08-10 18:45:31 +0000 UTCWell, that was certainly satisfying!
Nomad
2025-08-10 18:43:48 +0000 UTCLove the line from Samsus about rats and backstabbers. Other officers sharing Dent’s attitude towards the shitheads is lovely.
G_AcheTheSnake
2025-08-10 18:41:25 +0000 UTCSuch a shame those desks spontaneously broke…
Hunter Farnsworth
2025-08-10 18:35:49 +0000 UTCYay
Zachary Hoda
2025-08-10 18:29:04 +0000 UTCWoohoo, let’s go!!!!!
Dirty Dibbler
2025-08-10 18:21:46 +0000 UTC
