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Early Access: STORMWEAVER 3 - Chapter 39v2 + 40 + THE STORY SO FAR [ROUGH]

DEFINITELY going to have to rework some of 40 because of an important inconsistency (Valera having talked to Kamiya's former combat instruct

DEFINITELY going to have to rework some of 40 because of an important inconsistency (Valera having talked to Kamiya's former combat instructors in Chapter 39), but it's about getting it written, not getting it right!

Editing sooooo fun sometimes! /s

🤣 Enjoy!

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NEW REMINDER: BOOK 3 CONTENT/SPOILERS ARE NOT TO BE MENTIONED OUTSIDE OF CHAPTER LEAK ANNOUNCEMENT POSTS. THANK YOU FOR UNDERSTANDING.

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A FEW RULES & REMINDERS:

Comments

That type shift call ray made after he toon that spear to the shoulder was just so perfect. That whole scene was so bad ass

Otis Carlisle

If I had to guess, there had to be some denials to make things continue to look normal/Chancery wasn't different enough from the average CAD assignee to represent a "variable" in this instance.

Max V

Not going to lie I'm a bit confused how chancery failed the third part of the assignment exam if the mind no longer cares about that? That said really enjoyed that last chapter.

Nathan S

New chapter 40 revision or rough draft of 41? Only ask because having withdrawals symptoms and need a Stormweaver fix. 🤣🤣

Dan

To be clear.. my thoughts here are such. The MIND is looking for war fighters. It's looking for assets. Not good people. Not the best. It's looking for followers as much as leaders. The MIND needs Sidorov as much as his blind followers to throw themselves at the Archons. Rare is a person that is followed just because he's great, like AoT's Erwin. As much as the ISCM needs Erwin's, sycophants and narcissists will do as well. Napoleons and Alexanders and Washingtons. And a Leda Truant to follow their every word

xanderbot93

Man, this is the perfect thing to get out of the hospital and come home too, something to cheer me up and look forward too, excellent timing 🙏🏽. I like where the mind left things off there. It confirms my suspicion about quite a few people

xanderbot93

I doubt Sarah is going to join Firesong, as the teams seem to specifically grouped by year. Then again Firesong is leagues above Valormade and Red Crown but I still think Sarah is moreso gonna dismantle the chokehold Sidorov has on the second year class and forge her own team. We may see them all work together if Bryce does end up deploying them all to the front lines to fight the Archons though.

Warlord

Yeah making Firesong’s growth spec more subtle was definitely the right move. You’re telling me Central knew about Endwalker but not the S0 Growth spec? Yeah right.

Warlord

A+ so far. I'm completely on board with the story thus far. I was a little iffy during the first chapters/ RE writes when viv s rank growth went back down to more believable spec but it makes the story a lot more plausible, as far as it can be anyways. Anyways thanks for all your hard work with the series i really do enjoy it

Christopher A Meeks

I can relate to Raydon so well, because when I was in high school, I was a wrestler, and I wrestled being totally blind against side opponents. our team was severely underrated sometimes, and we surprise a lot of people by winning.

Tim Kilgore

I would ask here before I asked Bryce

Hope

I have some questions I would like to ask. Do I post them here? Do I send a PM to Bryan? Just some things I am confused about.

Aerich Rea

miku miku beeeeeeeam

oscar

Thank you for the update, both the version 2 of chapter 39 as well as the new chapter 40. The ending of 39 flows better and keeps true to Catcher's character and personality without being too out there or extreme. I still enjoy Siderov getting his butt kicked, might be a chance for growth? (Doubt it, but you never know...) Regarding the MIND and variables. I saw many questioning why any get denied due to the third test, but I think it would be a little more complex than that. The MIND, in searching for variables, is most probably not "throwing out the book" but rather looking at the people coming in more holistically rather than using the firm checklist which is implied by what is expressed by the people of this setting. In cases like Raiden, the variable was stretched to disregard his physical prowess. He more than passed the knowledge and intelligence aspects, and showed not great physicality, but also showed that he was not using his lack as an excuse but rather as a challenge to overcome. This is shown in the writting by his making the fighting team even though he is not physically suited to that particular activity. In the first book, at the tournament, he was only 1 win behind some on his team that were not so limited physically, implying that even though he was limited by his disease this limitation did not stop him from succeeding, only made success harder for him than for others with the same ambitions. In addition he shows that he leverages his few advantages to the best of his ability to succeed, or at least to get as close to success as he can. It may be these that tipped him over to be selected, rather than it being completely random, it is just as expansion of what can be considered in the selection process as marginal, but acceptable as a test of hypothesis With Siderov it may have been his determination and drive to be the best that pushed him over the edge for selection, not necessarily the psychopathy. It is thought that sociopaths and narcissists can be incredibly successful in positions of power, and a CAD user is pretty much the definition of power in this universe. Just being sociopathic or narcissistic is not evil, it is the expression of these traits that places it in that realm. With all that said, Siderov is an ass and would make a good crime lord in any other universe, but I like the thought that he will hit his limit long before team Fire Song and friends get close to theirs, it makes me happy to see a "bad guy" get their just desserts Thank you again for all your work, it makes my day lighter to have something wonderful to read

Mike Gilbert

So... Sarah is somehow going to have to fit into/with Firesong, right? Maybe an expansion of teams? Can you imagine - Current Firesong, plus Sarah plus Lennon, and maybe Dice? Also, I wonder, could Kamiya sponsor Lennon, to get a less obvious lead in Galen's? Maybe sponsor him (third year) , then Sarah (2nd year), then Rei and team (1st year?)

Scott

Replied to you dont know if it shows up as it seams to tag me not you when I hit reply

MJ Sanderson

Hopefully we get a flashback to Dent’s perspective but I’m pretty sure she’d have figured it out the second she looked Sarah in the eyes

Gandalf The Last

I’ve seen that before, pretty sure it’s just a little oopsie. I left a long ass response at the top of these comments, if you want to give it a like I’d be happy to help Bryce with problems like that before the books get released :)

Gandalf The Last

PLEASE READ BRYCE!!!! If you don’t have a designated editor then I’d be happy to fix grammatical errors free of charge. Little inconsistencies make a huge difference in immersion and this is by far my favorite series currently being released. Seeing those issues in your previously published books irked me to no end, so please reach out if you would like a second set of eyes to read through and offer corrections on any inconsistencies. I’m not trying to take over someone else’s job in any way, just offering this with goodwill and an appreciation for your creation. (I’ve read through Warformed at least 4 times.) Now, if I’m being honest, your release schedule pisses me off. HOWEVER, that’s only because of how excited I am to read every new chapter you release. You and this story have me hook, line, and sinker buddy. I (and probably everyone else who subscribes on here) want these novels to be the best that they possibly can be. I hope this doesn’t make me sound like a complete ass, but you need someone to proofread before the final draft if you want your story to be released in the best possible form. The previous installments in this series had errors that should NOT have been there and took away from the imagery that’s inherently created. I apologize for this essay in your comments but I simply want/hope to help. It’s not alll magnanimous by the way. Helping you to create a better product gives me the opportunity to enjoy it more. Anyways, thank you for letting us appreciate your imagination<3

Gandalf The Last

Thank you, Bryce..soooo needed!!

Dee

Re reading book 1. Does anyone know why ward doesn't use 3 in his test answers when going for his cad. It goes 1, 2, them 4 when he's writing his answers.

MJ Sanderson

I can’t wait to see catcher implode sidorovs face in his nicknames the crown breaker and sidorovs is kings law how fitting

Bj

Pantheon has a nice ring to it, but it think Fire Song still fits.

Dragons'Sheppard1995

Great chapter, I feel we are going in a good direction, so many interesting things happening. So many charismatic characters, this world deserves more stories.

Francisco Javier Periñán

Great chapter, I feel we are going in a good direction, so many interesting things happening. So many charismatic characters, this world deserves more stories.

Francisco Javier Periñán

When did the staff become aware of Rey being from the kamiya family ?

Mike

Yay, externals!!! That’d be a sweet evolution. Also, I’d love to see a new ability soon.

Matt Hammond

I don't think it's "only", but perhaps he didn't fail the last section (nobody does anymore) because the Mind is seeking variables. He clearly is talented, so probably did well in the other two sections.

Christopher E. Backus

hatsune miku

Hayden Stachelek

So Sidorov only got a CAD because he was unstable and the Mind wanted to see what would happen 🙃

Kemlion

Really enjoyed this update to 39 and the revelations in 40. And you kept the thing! Nice. I'm just relistening to Book 2 and I seriously think their team name should be changed from Fire Song to Pantheon. These guys are all going to end up as gods on the field with how much effort they put in and the hurdles they will be overcoming. Looking forward to seeing Cash and Grants next upgrades and what happens when Aria gets Seed 3.

Matt O'Connor

This definitely answers a lot of questions. It also shows that the mind is at least as desperate as General Abel

Jared Plunkett

Very. I'm beginning to think this story is waaaaaay darker in potential than we've seen so far.

Justus Wingert

Love the improved ending in 39V2 and that the little line is still there. Great moment to sprinkle some humor in. And damn... Chapter 40 is a bomb. Kinda wanna give Sarah a big fucking hug. Makes me wonder how fucked up her life was up til this point. A part of me thinks that Rei, despite being discarded and with his full illness, got the better life. And damn again with the relevation of the MIND and Sidorov... Just how fucked are they?

Dragons'Sheppard1995

Oooh, I like that. It fits so well.

Matt O'Connor

Sidorov’s team name is King’s Law… Catcher’s official Arena Name is “Crownbreaker”… I have a feeling good ol’ Layton will get his revenge sometime in the future.

Christian Kalemkiewicz

I think there’s Ascension about the mind, but we have to remember that it’s still a huge computer. So, variables, and those variations that come with it are just a part of its personality. It’s going to be interesting to see how Ray and the crew cope with sitter of.

Tim Kilgore

Excellent. Another great chapter. I gave the MIND a larger sense of control when it comes to variables. This is much better than Sidorov being a known project. It provides a sense of randomness to the challenges that Rei and the gang will face in the future.

Russell Stephenson

Got to love Catchers and im sure everyone catcher included though he was joking but we all remember when he first fell in love even if hes not really sure right now. Sarah realizing and understanding everything makes me happy. The mind blatantly saying that all he wanted was variables and how even when these psychos aren't supposed to be cad users, they are because of variables. Its a dark line for sure i love it. Rei and catcher are a close competition for my favorite but catcher is winning ever so slightly still. Can't wait to watch him go ballistic one day.

Christian

It wasn't obvious before? Like with Grant, who without getting lucky and meeting someone who cared would have gone on to be just as unhinged?

ProVVoke

Sweet mercy that bomb in 40. Holy shit.

Nahar

A new excellent chapter for my birthday! Yay I knew you cared Bryce! 😂😂 Amazing work as always sir! Im So in love with these characters! His sister though… I can already tell shes going to become one of my favorites for sure!!

Bill Hilliard

That's been a thing since the first book! It's been subtle, but there for those who pay attention, and I think was rather bluntly confirmed in the second book. Regardless, welcome to the "in the know" club :)

Craig Bentsen

Thank you Bryce for the new chapter and the outstanding revision of 39. The story update was very helpful. Enjoy your Canadian vacation.

Hope

Was it just me that was thrown for a loop by dent calling Maddie her girlfriend. I would have thought that she would be to focused on the coming disaster.

Manpolar

Thank you, I really needed this today!

Nicole Campbell

The MIND allowed Viv to hospitalize herself just to see where it would lead. It’s in concert with Abel for a number of pushes though it has a slightly tighter feedback loop as to what might break the cadets than Abel’s ham fisted S0’s at the tournament.

gratch42

Thanks for the great revision and the new chapter. In chapter 39 - wouldn’t mind a shared look between Viv (with a hint of a blush) and Logan just after Dent destroys Sid just as a quick callback - and Logan’s kind of missing in this scene. In chapter 40 - a direct mention of Archons by the MIND of those who will not treat Rei well. Just to touch base that this is a war and there is an enemy.

gratch42

Great addition to Ch 39. Chapter 40 was a fantastic insight chapter. I’m really hoping 41 involves Catchers reveal and some training for our main crew. We need some combat action with Catcher’s new gear and hopefully another Rei evolution as he’s got to be overdue. I’m just curious if that gets him an external. He has to be approaching one with his development. Granted, each of the things listed is a want and Bryce is the guy who knows the process he’s working towards.

Kory Leach

Were there any significant changes to the chapters before 39?

SomethingInteresting

That last line was cold as ice lmao

Polyist's Apostle

Love the change to the last line of ch39. Cackled while reading it. Thanks for the chapters!

P D

Friday came so fast! I love how everyone is so protective of Rei. For one reason or another. I feel like the MIND caring so much for variables could lead into some good payoffs and twists. The way it ended felt really ominous

LeaphyMoon

One thing that Bryce has been really good at is communication. Has been from the get go. So I have faith that any changes in the plan for this series will be shared. From writers block to a potential "time to pick up the pace". But yeah, definitely don't want this to turn into a play by play of Reis entire life lol

LeaphyMoon

I admit, I am torn. I love this, and I love how it's developing. And if an author's love for their characters is determined by the challenges thrown their way, this isn't something Rei can outfight, or outrun. The "torn" part is that we're here at chapter 40. We're on book 3. I've made jokes in the past about how a "trilogy" isn't going to cut it, but it's only the freshman year, and the semester has just started? I don't know if you can keep writing this series for years, Bryce, but in today's environment it feels like a story of hope over adversity, and it's so much damn fun to read. As long as you keep writing them, I'll keep reading them (within reason - Iron Prince 23: The fires of Acheron Part 1 might be a bit much)

dcshort2

Well DAMN!!!! That’s intense!!! Also Bryce, you refer to Kestrel as Kel instead of Kes a few times. Threw me for a loop for a minute there :o)

Iron Akela

Interesting reveal there but also not that surprising in light of the implied loss in the war steadily building. I'm curious how that tracks with some like Chancery or any others who failed. Perhaps they simply weren't displaying as enough of a variable to bother passing? Chancery actually worked to take it again and pass which is unusual, which may have qualified her in MIND's eyes. It does outright imply that under normal standards, Sidorov would not have passed. How would he take that if he knew? I wonder if that means similarly for Logan or anyone else who seems to have personality or psychological issues that could be a detriment. Nice small talk with Sarah. She does seem to share some things in common with her grandfather given she apparently also didn't quite listen to Jasper. I would imagine that Jasper wanted her to know but wasn't exactly approving of how Sarah went about it. There is a risk here for how willing MIND may be willing to go. Unless something changed, I don't think it was behind the attack at the SCTs. I could absolutely see it, but I think MIND is currently wanting challenges within reason and that could have easily wound up ruining everything even if it appears to have worked out.

Voror

Maybe the variable was that she did pass but wanted to see how she reacted to “failing” and having to try again and how much harder she might work to prove herself

G_AcheTheSnake

Didn’t Chancery say she failed the third portion? What stood out about her so much that the MIND failed her despite not seemingly caring about passing/failing people there

Warlord

That was a LOT. I'm sort of glad to see the MIND showing that it too can be ruthless -- maybe even giving Abel a run for the money. Maybe Central hasn't been the "villain" in all of Ward's challenges?

Todd Smith

I’m so glad the psyc-eval was mentioned I was wondering how the heck that guy passed it to begin with

Wrathwind

Perfect timing. 'm about to take lunch at work.

Daniel Posey

I saw that last bit coming a mile away. But holy hell. It means a lot for the future books

Tim Murray

Try now?

Wraithmarked Creative

Let's go, forgot it was Friday!!

NerdGinger

Story so far link is broken -- "media file not found" , but off to read the chappies!

Craig Bentsen

Never been happier to accidentally be awake before my alarm will go off

G_AcheTheSnake


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