Early Access: STORMWEAVER 3 - CHAPTER 1 [ROUGH] [NEW]
Added 2023-12-22 13:08:39 +0000 UTCHey guys! Just a quick drop today with a new Chapter 1 to the book. This is a short insert chapter I wanted between the Prologue and the old Chapter 1 that I think adds a good amount to the world/story/early-book situation. Hope you like it!
Chapter 5 (after renumbering) and our first "The Story So Far" coming next week!
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A few rules & reminders:
- Chapters will be dropping as Bryce completes them. That means anywhere from every 1 to 2 weeks on average, though sometimes waits may be longer.
- Recall that these are rough chapters, with no editing other than a single pass-through as Bryce writes.
- On a similar note, we are not asking for advice or corrections at this time. If Bryce wants feedback, we will certainly reach out, thank you! If you want to voice concerns or complaints about the chapter, you may now do so over on the Reddit discussion thread below! Notifications are turned off on those conversations, so they're a free-for-all now (within the rules of the subreddit, obviously)!
THE REDDIT THREAD:
https://www.reddit.com/r/Warformed/s/1gdsIgcpS8
Comments
Rei already has PTSD. Remember when he started tweaking when talking with carmen?
Alexander
2024-01-04 13:21:31 +0000 UTCOk so I’ve read the whole thing and alllll I got to say @bryce is HOT DAMN🫦
Xien
2023-12-25 04:47:04 +0000 UTCNow THIS IS WHAT I WAS WAITING FOR… I haven’t even finished reading it fully and just had to post!!! Booooommmm!!!
Xien
2023-12-25 04:42:08 +0000 UTCI think she took an early interest in him because Kes and The Mind have given her the assignment of helping him advance to be humanity's last hope.
Sam
2023-12-24 02:39:29 +0000 UTCFantastic chapter! I just hope Maddie doesn’t stay over often. I can only imagine what an S ranked (or close to it) strength spec in a nightmare flashback reaction could do to a baseline human. I’m fortunate, I came back from all three of my combat tours (mostly) well adjusted and now (thankfully) completely. Several of my buddies suffer from traumatic PTSD and have nearly hurt their spouse due to night terrors where they woke up “fighting”. Have a great Christmas (or holiday) week!
Kory Leach
2023-12-23 03:27:57 +0000 UTCStrong viewpoint in just a few pages. Hope you and yours have a great holidays.
gratch42
2023-12-22 22:56:09 +0000 UTCGives more weight to her dismissal of Reese and telling him he’s clueless about the war.
gratch42
2023-12-22 22:46:34 +0000 UTCThis series is amazing, this chapter made me want to re-read the whole thing...again.
Jordan Clark
2023-12-22 20:39:34 +0000 UTCFixed!
Wraithmarked Creative
2023-12-22 16:27:05 +0000 UTCheads up, the reddit link is going to the Chapter 1 V2 thread, not the new one. it may just be me though
JRatt
2023-12-22 15:59:04 +0000 UTCWhat is with all these amazing emotional chapters?!?!?!? Every chapter for this book so far has been absolutely fantastic.
Mistfate
2023-12-22 15:46:10 +0000 UTCOh wow! Ask and you shall receive...haha. I was just asking if there had been discussion on Dent. Her backstop is sure to be mind-blowing. She sees herself in Rei, doesn't she. She took an early interest in him to possibly prevent what happened to her from happening to him and his team, I believe. Can't wait for this to unfold. My mind is racing right now. I am so friggin' STOKED by this chapter... 😱 okay, gotta go back to the first to books to make sure I didn't miss anything. Cheers mates!
K.Impossible
2023-12-22 15:07:26 +0000 UTCLoved it!!! Fantastic chapter, it makes Dent feel so much more real seeing how past events still impact her, plus it also puts into perspective how she can hold it together during the day and all she has told the students about the war.
Neriel
2023-12-22 15:04:45 +0000 UTCSo good! I love the fact that even an S ranked user one of the strongest users in the Galaxy can be brought low by fear.
Executive313
2023-12-22 14:57:20 +0000 UTCOh man I adore this. I've wanted more of a look behind the curtain for Dent for a while, heck yes!!!!
empyreal26
2023-12-22 14:11:19 +0000 UTCGreat chapter!! Thank you!!
Heather Herren
2023-12-22 13:56:52 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. Does a lot to humanise Dent, and to show us her PTSD. And that the attack at sectionals impacted her too
Iron Akela
2023-12-22 13:33:35 +0000 UTCI was expecting her to have horrible PTSD with what we have learned about her so far. It’s also a fear I have for Firesong, that some time in the future, they will lose a member of their squad in battle against the archons. Great chapter to add to the story!
Linn G
2023-12-22 13:20:31 +0000 UTCMe too. Almost forgot that she too had her own trauma.
Angela McWilliams
2023-12-22 13:17:30 +0000 UTCGreat chapter. Shows ptsd very well and gives us a glimpse into what happened to her.
Dell
2023-12-22 13:17:14 +0000 UTCOkay the last 2 paragraphs just gave me goosebumps all over!
Gama
2023-12-22 13:15:49 +0000 UTC
