Patreon-exclusive postcard WIP 2, and Chapt 1v2 coming Thursday, with Chapter 2 coming this weekend!
Added 2023-11-14 12:31:12 +0000 UTCSaying it allowed to make myself accountable for it! I finally have a better direction then the kinda dumb you guys got with the first version of Chapter 1, so I want to start over with less data dumping/recap! I think it will be much much better!
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Yea, Rei’s face looks feminine in this drawing - the long hair and cheekbones to jaw ratio are contributing factors. He also has a rather abnormally small mouth. I love it otherwise. PS - Rei’s hair could not have gotten that long yet. The normal hair growth rate is about an inch a month. So I’m guessing it would take 1.5-2 years for his hair to grow that long from the short cut he got at the start of the Galen’s school year. I LOVE the long hair look…but maybe add a comment somewhere about CAD growth affecting hair growth too? Or adjust the art.
ABTelford
2024-07-14 05:20:56 +0000 UTCRei's face also looks feminine for some reason.
Kirivina
2023-12-01 17:36:13 +0000 UTCI don't know if its just me, but I feel like Rei should be shorter. It feels like if he stood up he would be the same height as Aria or maybe even taller.
JayLynn
2023-11-18 10:32:38 +0000 UTCNone if that looks like what I thought the books described. Isn't the shield supposed to be way bigger?
Wes Brown
2023-11-16 16:33:13 +0000 UTCJust joined this patreon and I just have to say that I love your take on this. For us to have the opportunity to follow the process for a small sum, read chapters in advance and get some pics and stuff is awesome!
Ludvig Wärnsten
2023-11-16 13:07:49 +0000 UTC
