EARLY ACCESS: STORMWEAVER 2 - Chapter 27, Part 1 [ROUGH]
Added 2022-08-13 22:32:03 +0000 UTCPLEASE READ:
1) This is only part of Chapter 27, but the scene hit me hard while on a walk this afternoon and I couldn't NOT write it. The rest of the chapter (the first part, ironically) will be released Friday as per usual as the complete chapter.
2) I DO NOT KNOW IF THE SECOND HALF OF THE SCENE IS GOING TO STAY LIKE THIS. I fucking love it because I think it adds a lot to one of the characters as well as the dynamic of the pair involved, but it's also... specific, and I don't know if the general audience will be able (or willing) to understand the healthy nature of the dynamic, especially given the conversation.
(please consider popping over to the r/Warformed subreddit to discuss this Chapter 27, Part 1 today or tomorrow if you have the time!
https://www.reddit.com/r/Warformed/comments/wnqira/stormweaver_ii_chapter_27_part_1_patreon_post/)
Needless to say, this is the chapter I'm most looking forward to your thoughts on so far...
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A few rules & reminders:
- Chapters will be dropping as Bryce completes them. That means anywhere from every 1 to 2 weeks on average, though sometimes waits may be longer.
- Recall that these are rough chapters, with no editing other than a single pass-through as Bryce writes.
That's it, so without further ado... Enjoy!
Comments
Iβm a sucker for this!!! Squeeee π₯°ππ₯Ή
Khite
2022-08-30 01:44:13 +0000 UTCLoved the scene. The whole thing, to me it seems to perfectly match their personalities.
Marcus
2022-08-17 14:09:39 +0000 UTCBased on the Logan Grant feedback a few weeks ago, this was definitely the conscientious, a peak behind the curtain if you will. Loving the direction of their honest intimacy and how comfortable they are with it. Very well handled! Moar.
Ghostbane
2022-08-16 12:58:14 +0000 UTCDifferent people different. Relationship. Each couple will move at different speeds
Tiffany Miller
2022-08-15 02:17:30 +0000 UTCI think the scene shows more about each character and is well done, howveach character acts seems to be in character for them and has been alluded to in book 1. My only concern is that this seems to be a big change in tone from book 1 where Rei and Aria danced around each other the whole book before even agreeing to go on one date. I'm not sure if this matters, though.
Trey Atkins
2022-08-14 19:05:19 +0000 UTCBryce, my guy. What kind of a walk did you take before you wrote this?! Excellent work sir. I like the story, the detail. Great flow between the passion/spiciness and tenderness between them. This type of relationship has a delicate balance of rough and soft (so I hear π ) and you walked that line perfectly.
2022-08-14 17:39:57 +0000 UTCIt's a great scene.
Joanne Hans
2022-08-14 15:31:42 +0000 UTCAlso, I know SOME people may see Logan's behaviour as aggressive but it perfectly fits Viv's personality that she would like it/react that way. AND people need to remember she is not some weak girl who could get hurt from these actions, she is a User who could probably pick up most men and throw them 50metres into the air. Therefore not helpless to get out of the situation if she wanted to.
Kyle Wilsnagh
2022-08-14 13:03:58 +0000 UTCThis is literally the first time I have ever understood what Viv sees in Logan. Think it adds so much to the story/thier relationship/both of their character development.
Kyle Wilsnagh
2022-08-14 12:58:32 +0000 UTCLove it!
Lori
2022-08-14 10:13:20 +0000 UTCAwesome conversation! Seeing her insecurities is also great, she had always seemed to put together with only her hot temper being her fault. I also like that Grant is able to stand up to her since Rei never really has been able to do so. I wouldn't change a thing.
Cynthia L.Lara
2022-08-14 09:30:36 +0000 UTCYes yesβ¦yes yes yes
Devin Jaros
2022-08-14 04:49:55 +0000 UTCI absolutely loved this scene. I have to admit, I struggled to accept Viv and Logan. It just kept feeling like a betrayal of Rei for her to have a secret relationsship with his tormenter. Regardless of his own issues. I felt like she should have been able to make him see Rei in a different light in MONTHS of them dating. Regardless of Rei accepting it some what I still had a very hard swallowing it, this changed that. So thank you.
Daniel Moth
2022-08-14 04:14:54 +0000 UTC
