EARLY ACCESS: STORMWEAVER II - Chapter 14
Added 2022-05-06 15:25:13 +0000 UTCGot unstuck, but haven't had a chance to clean up the second half of this scene, so sorry for the mess. Also, not sure if this ending is going to stay the same...
Also also, not sure if I'm ending the chapter here, or continuing from a different point of view. We'll find out!
-Bryce
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A few rules & reminders:
- Chapters will be dropping as Bryce completes them. That means anywhere from every 1 to 2 weeks on average, though sometimes waits may be longer.
- Recall that these are rough chapters, with no editing other than a single pass-through as Bryce writes.
- On a similar note, we are not asking for advice or corrections at this time. If Bryce wants feedback, we will certainly reach out, thank you!
That's it, so without further ado... Enjoy!
Comments
I think Bryce enjoys torturing his fanbase
Tad
2022-05-09 21:23:46 +0000 UTCJust want to say wow i thought it was good but damn is it getting even better. On a personal note if it was me all fudged up over someone else almost killing me I would of gone along the lines of. They tested to see if I was willing to take out a friend and pushed me to a could of been near death experience. Sir would you ask central if they want a hostile and possibly towards them murderous user with unlimited potential? I would like to see in future Ray maybe giving central a big fuck you and state what they have done to the public and his growth spec once he is powerful enough to say come try to silence me I dare you.
Hammertime Gunzablaze
2022-05-08 14:11:15 +0000 UTCReally it’s to bad he doesn’t know or realize his relationship with his grandfather. I’m pretty the dude would go scorched earth on central if he knew what happened.
Joel Wilkinson
2022-05-08 05:08:36 +0000 UTCEven if it has never happened before, there is a real issue that gives it away. Rei's CAD rank is slightly higher than Logan's but all his Stats except speed lag Logans, some of them significantly. Grant would know this - all CAD users would know this, because they can choose what level stat (eg speed) to engage, so they have a decent idea of each others stats once they see them used. This means the difference between Rei's CAD stats and Rei's CAD rank is being made up in just onne place - Rei's Growth Stats.
Richard Jackway
2022-05-07 22:03:43 +0000 UTCNow I really want to read at least a glimpse of that fateful night when Viv was punching Logan after Rei was jumped. That was a pivotal moment and we never actually seen it firsthand.
Sandy
2022-05-07 17:03:32 +0000 UTCDagnabbit Bryce, how long are you going to make us wait to find out about Shido's new Evolution? Lol
Rusty Barnes
2022-05-07 16:22:42 +0000 UTCYeah but it’s also never happened ever As only afew times and not recorded publicly so it’s just not quite believable that he could have S Growth but I get where your coming from… also Logan only just came to the full realisation that is rai as he was dismissing him in his mind as just another cadet that’s worked very hard
Will Pembo
2022-05-07 15:38:26 +0000 UTCLogan and Cashe are great examples of how a writer can take 2d characters and flesh them out. It really makes the world so much more vibrant and relatable.
kyle walker
2022-05-07 15:04:51 +0000 UTCSo fun. Yah, I can see why you might want to redo the end. It seems like no-nonsense Grant would just respond, something to the effect of “Because your growth stat is S ranked.” It’s too logical of a conclusion to keep up the spy games.
LaFawn Scott
2022-05-07 14:43:17 +0000 UTCThese have been so exciting to read. I’m curious if the Lasher will be back. He did say he would be seeing them. Or if Rei reconsiders Kamiya Corp’s offer with an addendum for protection. Thank you Bryce. Your efforts are truly appreciated!!
Heather Herren
2022-05-07 13:58:50 +0000 UTCI would like to see Rei just show Cash and Logan what his spec is , you have to trust the people your going into battle with even if its not actual battle with real weapons. There is less likely for something to go wrong if you trust the people that are one your team to do their job, and not second guess everything.
Joanne Hans
2022-05-07 13:50:52 +0000 UTCThank You Bryce! That was brilliant, OMG.
Ibiso Charles
2022-05-07 10:20:47 +0000 UTC"Also, he didn’t feel like getting castrated the next time he snuck Viv into his room…" THE NEXT TIME??
Dakota Blackwell
2022-05-07 08:09:30 +0000 UTC
