2 line edit spots left, get em while they're hot!
Added 2022-11-29 18:08:51 +0000 UTChey i've got time/energy for 2 more line edits this month
if you're
-writing an essay for a magazine
-writing an artist statement
-writing an art historical/visual cultural/internet etc. thesis paper
bump up to the $50 tier and i'll read your paper and give you all the in-depth feedback i can
as i mentioned before, here's what I look to develop in an edit:
-a BOLD thesis statement. The first paragraph should immediately pique the reader's interest while establishing your intentions for what comes next
-CLARITY in every part of the writing. No nonsense, no wordiness, no repetition. Writing is meant to be enjoyed and understood by the reader, not bore them into submission
-overall CONSISTENCY. What are the core insights of this writing and how do they relate back to the thesis? Does the analysis make sense? Does the writing build to a clear conclusion?
bump up, send me your essay at bradtroemel@gmail.com and i'll get back to you ASAP
Comments
ππ»ββοΈthank you! I hadn't seen the artist statement report before
Abbott Shea
2022-12-01 03:12:17 +0000 UTC*one
Brad Troemel
2022-12-01 02:43:00 +0000 UTCYup, here's a report about how to write an artist statement: https://www.patreon.com/posts/new-video-report-44754205
Brad Troemel
2022-12-01 02:41:47 +0000 UTCany tips for someone just trying to write in general? have trouble getting started, but wish I had something to take advantage of this for! maybe just more hustle π
Abbott Shea
2022-12-01 02:29:50 +0000 UTC
