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i will line edit your writing (thesis paper / think piece / artist statement)

Added 2022-11-18 16:55:40 +0000 UTC

Noticed a bunch of people who reached out about doing a studio visit were ultimately looking for a close read on their writing, so.....

Bump up to the $50 tier this month if you want me to line edit + give overall feedback on your artist statement, think piece, or thesis paper

This is an irresponsibly underpriced offer compared to the cost of getting a line edit via a college class lol

Here's what I look to develop in an edit:

-a BOLD thesis statement. The first paragraph should immediately pique the reader's interest while establishing your intentions for what comes next

-CLARITY in every part of the writing. No nonsense, no wordiness, no repetition. Writing is meant to be enjoyed and understood by the reader, not bore them into submission

-overall CONSISTENCY. What are the core insights of this writing and how do they relate back to the thesis? Does the analysis make sense? Does the writing build to a clear conclusion?

bump up a tier, send me an email at bradtroemel@gmail.com with your writing attached and i'll get back to you ASAP