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So another story, Its about Rukia and her Brother Byakuya, focusing mainly on in-cest, Again, I'll repeat if you're not upto it, Don't read, these are mature writings and FanFiction, Intended to be "What-if" scenarios. Enjoy this little story. If you like this story to have part 2, let me know. Enjoy

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Yess we definitely need MORE incest content 😍🥵🥵🥵

Kendall Lepage

That start was really good. Next time you choose good point in story and their relation was soo spicy. Now i understand why Rukia that much respect her brother. Btw as always story blow with emotions from start to end. Definitely need know more story. Thank you for share them with US ♥️♥️♥️

Kiku waifu

I love your way with words Prim, incest is so hot and I'm surprised how well you are with storytelling. The way you went into detail about how she was stripped out of everything in her cell was told so sensually, especially with how her nipples went hard and her saliva oozing onto her chest 🤤 I loved how he commanded her to open her mouth wide to eat and taste his cum :3 Your writing style for this one was very specific on the sensory details for Rukia which I took a liking to and I loved the tension between them. Rukia being so vulnerable was great and the dominance of Byakuya was well written as well. Once again, another lovely read Prim. I enjoy reading the fantasies that run through your head 😊

stanebi

I’m not very confident on how to really compliment this properly 😅. Commenting on writing feels a bit more challenging for me. But this is also a good thing cause maybe now my commenting skills will improve 😁. What I can say definitely is this theme excited me. And I mean the whole theme. The sister part, the tied up, the rough fucking and of course the amount of time he spurted cum in an on her. As I was reading it it’s slowly got me more and more excited. The description you gave of how Rukia was tied up and what she was wearing to how her brother entered the cell and was reacting to seeing her state. Of course as I read more and more I got bricked up, nearing the end of the story or maybe it was even during it but I could feel the precum leaking out. Maybe that’s too much information, idk 🤷 you tell me but I felt it’s important to tell you how my body reacted to your story. Your story telling was incredibly good, again from the characters introductions to the way you portrayed their movements and desires. The short responses are nice too, example “Nii-sama, forgive me!' Rukia gasped, pussy clenching involuntarily, juices slicking her thighs.” And the variating lengths were nice too as they got more into the act their actions become more intertwined. I did really enjoy and like this story. Your creative writing is fucking amazing. If I had any critiques hmmm 🤔🤔🤔🤔 I can’t really think of anything 😅. Maybe go a little more in depth to the reactions of the perpetrator. Like here “He freed his cock—long, thick, veined shaft throbbing, head leaking pre-cum—and hiked her thong aside. One brutal thrust speared her pussy, walls stretching tight around his girth, balls slapping her clit”. Maybe something like He whence’s and bites his lips. Just a little more perspective of the ones committing the act. Thank you for making such a captivating and moving story 💕 sorry if this isn’t good feedback. I don’t really know how to approach these yet 😅 but it was a lovely story and I’m excited to see what else you come up with in the future. Your mind is a beautiful place 💕. Have a good weekend and much love prix

Tucan Sam

Holy…wow that was one hell of a turn on to read. Incest is so kinky, and the way you describe everything in so much detail, it makes it really easy to picture him using each of his beloved sister’s holes. I’ll definitely keep this one saved to go back to multiple times in the future, it’s a great start to the weekend!! 😍

Doshag

So good once again! I love your way of writing the scene

Reikinari

Yess I love it eagerly awaiting part 2 😏

Kendall Lepage

I promise not to ramble like this next time lol😅

Roblovin

Gave a quick skim, seems like great writing, love the way you describe things in detail, suppose I’d expect no less from the artist that has such a talented for detail lol. Thank you for sharing. A bit intense for me though. Which is okay, it ain’t just for me. You take that freedom to write whatever you can imagine and run with it my friend🫡 don’t let me influence how you create

Roblovin

You're turning out to be my favorite haha

PRIxMAL

Nothing like erotic scenarios between family members to start my day... thanks a lot 👍🙌👏

Hugo D. Alvarez


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