I'm backey-back. I have arrived. Yo he llegado. Tōchaku shimashita

Great to see you’re back my man! Hope you’re all good. I just wanted to say I LOVE the mod. Like you’ve nailed it. It makes the relationship between Serana and the Dragonborn what it always should have been, every suggestion from here from people I think is more just being nit picky. I cannot overstate how happy I am with it. I’ve wanted something like this for years. I do have few suggestions. I have no concept of scripts etc so forgive me if these are not feasible. This is simply from a narrative and immersion perspective. And again, this is just really nit picky stuff, you’ve done amazing work and you and Kerstyn should be proud. • Having Serana interact with the players children would be cool. Perhaps showing trepidation at the responsibility at first, and then becoming more up for it, until she eventually realises she can give them a childhood she never got to have and fully and happily engages with them and takes on a motherly role. • The Marriage. Serana doesn’t want to do it in a temple. So I always felt like a simple solution would be to have an outdoors wedding somewhere familiar and safe for her, like the players home at Lakeview manor. Would it be possible to create a ceremony there? Perhaps nodding the craft system to create temporary pews, a flowery archway, lanterns etc to make it pretty? (Again aware you focus on dialogue so if it’s not feasible, ignore me). • Some of the sex scenes felt a little soon and out of place. And would perhaps be better replaced with the kissing cutaway. Would it be possible to have the love scenes come into the he relationship later? Especially considering being intimate is something Serana would be terrified of, I kinda felt there should have been a long build up to this. Even from when the relationship starts. I feel like there should have been a series of conversations or location triggers that lead to conversations where the player tries to help Serana heal from her trauma until she finally feels comfortable enough to be intimate. Would make it far more rewarding and seem like a big deal, which for her, it would be a HUGE deal. (This is just my opinion so feel free to ignore. Just throwing around ideas. There was also some dialogue that seemed to imply Serana used sex to seduce and hold power over people, but I felt like Serana’s only experience was with Molag Bal during the ceremony, after which she was so terrified of it that she never wanted to have it again... until she meets LDB. And even then after a long time of bonding as a couple. But I’m aware this could be a lot of work). Any other stuff I think is stuff you’re already working on. Please don’t take my suggestions as unhappiness. They most definitely aren’t. I LOVE your mod. Just wanted to offer some creative ideas as I went to drama school and I get very invested in stories, Serana being one of them.

CrowAngel, Falcon, Matt, these are suggestions I have taken into mind for the romance tweaks! I did also feel that the transition to sexytime could have been written a bit better or done more naturally :)

Martimius

I see I was not the only one caught off guard by just how sudden that was. Jumping immediately from "we are now in a relationship" to sexy time felt very odd. If it were up to me, I'd have an option to delay it until marriage, or at least after a couple dates.

MattTheMighty

+1 for the last comment. More stage setting after the Soul Cairn sequence would be good, since rushing straight to business on the castle balcony was a bit unexpected - and funny, actually.

hi great work and just a small suggestion i noticed.. following the exit of thesoul cairn our relationship took the 'i love you step' then immediatly went into kiss and immediatly in the next moment the first sex.. not following on just one scene of dialogue.. the actions.. dialogue.. then action.. that bit seemed a little rushed and would have been nice to have it trigger to say a hesitant 1st date 2nd date etc a long over due kiss and finally set a stage for say a hearthside passionate 1st time together instead of in the freezing cold the second we exited the castle lol

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