All Access: Fair Exchange Part 3
Added 2020-12-01 07:31:24 +0000 UTCThings don't go according to plan when Daniel finally confronts the bear.
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Thanks for the wonderful feedback Glyn! Already made my month and its just starting. =) I'm really happy you're enjoying this tale. Its always fun to create a situation with characters set and comfortable in their ways only for a force of nature to come along and totally disrupt it. The bear really is a monster. He knows his ability and uses it to his advantage. There's absolutely nothing to lose for the bear and he knows that. Hopefully I can tie it all up nicely with the final chapter. =)
Lykos Bane
2020-12-02 18:00:33 +0000 UTCLIGHT SPOILERS FOLLOW I especially enjoyed the way you retell Meg's debauchery as flashbacks during the conversation with her son. It varies the narrative structure in a way that's fresh and fun, and it ruthlessly frames every infidelity as a transgression about to be discovered. Vedmid is surprisingly loquacious about his motivations in this chapter, but I suppose that Daniel is pretty dense and so the bear does need to rub the pup's nose in what's really going on if the message is ever to get through. I loved his declaration that he is not gay, as if to say, "I fuck your wife because I like girls. I fuck you because I like to fuck with you." Poor Daniel has not yet placed the familiar scent on the bear's cock, which means there is at least one more enjoyably humiliating revelation to come. I do hope there might be a three-way for Vedmid and the Fergusons in the future. The bear has been generous so far in allowing Daniel the privilege of privacy in his debasement. Surely that cannot last forever! ;)
Glyn Wolf
2020-12-02 05:13:46 +0000 UTCI've always felt that the most delicious feature of your stories is the meticulous way that you build the stakes, and in that regard this series is a feast. No matter what they may tell themselves, Meg, Daniel and Rice would clearly hazard almost anything for their next encounter with Vedmid, and the bear delights in testing that weakness to the utter limit. Every chapter relentlessly winds them up one turn closer either to breaking or to ruin. Anticipating when the elastic will snap is as engrossing as Vedmid's erotic and overpowering scent. Every chapter has been a delight! I don't want to be one of those fans who adds "I can't wait for the next chapter," even though that's true. It sounds so ungrateful always to demand more. I'll just say that I'm loving the ride, and thrilled to read whatever you choose to write next. :3
Glyn Wolf
2020-12-02 05:11:24 +0000 UTC
