Brightshore Ch4 Pg1 WIP
Added 2023-05-25 17:55:26 +0000 UTCStarting up Chapter 4 with a trip to Mr. Byland office. Hope you still enjoy seeing my work process as this is the rough draft for the page. ^^
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Wait a minute. A previously omnipresent fashion accessory seems to be missing. I wonder if that's significant in any way... Also, is it my imagination, or are there a couple of things that appear to be less endowed than they were the last time we saw them? Is that top doing a fantastic job of hiding magical mischief, or...... Nonono, that can't be it. After all, Byland mentioned the 'event from the other night', and no one has said anything to suggest that there are any other events that he could possibly be referring to other than our crew's attempted break-in from the end of chapter 2, right? *whew* What a relief. For a second there I thought I'd stumbled onto something important, but I guess I was just jumping at bimbos, er, shadows... yeah. That's what I meant.
Your Servant is Your Master
2023-05-26 00:09:40 +0000 UTCOh crap! Candy is in trouble now. I think it’s finally time to see if she’s been a spy or sleeper agent like some people theorized.
Emmitt Cleveland
2023-05-25 18:40:41 +0000 UTCSo did chapter 3 end on a cliffhanger then
Peelbird777
2023-05-25 18:33:35 +0000 UTCWhen we first met Candy, Kobi mentioned that her real name is Candy. Which has me guessing that Candy could be immune to some extent of the books changes.
John Veltri
2023-05-25 18:31:44 +0000 UTCHas her name *always* been Candy? *Hmmm.* :D
Suplexception
2023-05-25 18:24:15 +0000 UTCWow, 1 page in, and we're already set up for another change~! I like the establishing shot of panel 1 with Byland's name plate peeking out a bit, and the POV shot you did with him holding the book in panel 5. https://imgur.com/a/83VtzbS Intentional or not, I like the way you lead the eye from one panel to the other(the link shows what I mean), via the word bubbles and certain focal points. It really makes things easier to read.
PolkaToonZ
2023-05-25 18:05:32 +0000 UTCUh oh..
TheScottishFox
2023-05-25 18:03:51 +0000 UTCI mean it's like she doesn't have any other choice, if she would say directly no, then she would get fired or just directly bimbofied and would love to pleasure Byland and work there then :3
Enrise89
2023-05-25 18:00:45 +0000 UTCShe literally got caught in a barrier trap the other day, witnessed her friend go through bimbofication, and still says she would still like to work for Byland. Hmmmmm.
Stan Verox
2023-05-25 17:58:34 +0000 UTC
