Chapter 8 of A Hero for the Maiden
Added 2024-03-22 08:39:14 +0000 UTC
Comments
There was a lot added to the story. Definitely adds more substance to the story
KillzoneDude
2024-04-06 14:54:26 +0000 UTCHow is Sansa dragging the story? She is the driving for the story. Without her, there wouldn't be any plot lol. Percy would just be lost and goes off to who knows where while the rest of the world goes on as canon. DM me with an example where the dialogue could be better. I appreciate any feedback.
Bub3loka
2024-04-05 09:11:57 +0000 UTCI still honestly believe Sansa is the one thing that drags the story down but everything else is fine. Though I would work on dialogue flow a bit more.
LT Butterfly287
2024-04-05 09:08:52 +0000 UTCI am glad you showed the Princess Trio are not damsels in distress that are solely reliant on Percy's protection. Sure, he's way more powerful than them, but that's because he's a demigod. It doesn't mean that 'girly girls' like Sansa, Marcella, and Rosamund won't defend themselves. Them wailing on those guys with cooking utensils was priceless! Lol
Foxesandbooks
2024-03-28 13:59:38 +0000 UTCOh good dragon eggs, for our favorite evil red witch to convince everyone to do something stupid... joy lol
Michael Rojas
2024-03-23 05:27:30 +0000 UTCThr thing is, there won't be much of a chance for Robb and Cat to meet Percy anytime soon. No teleportation shenanigans in my story lol
Bub3loka
2024-03-22 23:37:40 +0000 UTCWhy Greek armor when he can get a modern Westerosi suit of armor which is a lot better than the archaic stuff that Riordan forced his characters to use for show?
Bub3loka
2024-03-22 17:05:08 +0000 UTCManderly will surely have a lot of things on his mind when he finds princess in the demigod of the sea. It will be a major arc, the White Harbor one, and I won't skim through it.
Bub3loka
2024-03-22 17:04:26 +0000 UTCIt is already technically fused with Percy. Will he evolve into something bigger is the question
Bub3loka
2024-03-22 17:03:40 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. But at some point will Poseidon fuse with Precy?
Sefa Baah
2024-03-22 17:00:49 +0000 UTCThey're flag is basically a merman version of Poseidon, complete with trident. Will they sense the sea in him?
Foxesandbooks
2024-03-22 16:49:49 +0000 UTCIf Percy could find smith that was innovative and willing (Gendry?) I could see him designing his own Valerian steel armor based on Greecian designs. Something lighter and more flexible than typical Westerosi armor. Also, I'm curious how the Manderlys will react to Percy? They're s
Foxesandbooks
2024-03-22 16:48:54 +0000 UTCEuron has one. A full set of it
Bub3loka
2024-03-22 16:44:58 +0000 UTCWhat about Valerian steel armor? I don’t think that’s ever been a thing unless they’re like a bunch of them in old Valeria then again, we wouldn’t know no one‘s ever been brave enough to go there at least not in Cannon
REDwolf28
2024-03-22 16:43:56 +0000 UTCPoseidon's love advice: Fuck 'em and leave 'em, or Fuck 'em and stay. 😆 I'm glad Percy got some more magical sea weapons. I can just see Robb/Cat/Jon/Bran/Anyone not Sansa raising a fit over some 'bastard sorcerer' using Ice. Regardless how much Sansa admires him, I imagine the Starks will all be very prejudice towards Percy at first, godly father or not. Catelyn might end up being his mortal version of Hera. Even Jon is pretty snooty despite also being illegitimate. He's very much a Stark Stick-in-the-Mud, while Percy is the unrestrained sea.
Foxesandbooks
2024-03-22 16:35:23 +0000 UTCDragon Eggs found on Dragonstone.. Does this mean we will see Shireen Baratheon: Mother of Dragons The Second Electric Boogaloo?
Erik Johanson
2024-03-22 12:24:36 +0000 UTC
