Chapter 19 of The Arc Moon System
Added 2023-12-26 14:18:41 +0000 UTCI'll be honest with you guys, I'm in serious need of an editor or beta reader for this story. None of my editors like RWBY, so I decided to allow comments on the google docs. If you want to leave a thought or simply edit something in the chapter, select the paragraph and leave your suggestions. Don't worry, it won't delete anything but I will see it
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You might be one of the minority, yet I won't let that stop me. Too many readers complaining about getting to Beacon gets annoying real quick so I appreciate your comment
Bub3loka
2024-01-24 17:10:28 +0000 UTCThere are very few writers that give great development with OC characters and their own twist on the world. I am more than happy to see you are one of them! Also I love this version of Jaune, Thank you!
KillzoneDude
2024-01-24 14:46:15 +0000 UTCmay~be Oh what the heck, might as well say it now. I plan for it to be Jaune/Weiss/Pyrrha with the possibility for more, probably Fie
Bub3loka
2023-12-26 17:07:26 +0000 UTCSo question, who is the paring or is this a harem story?
REDwolf28
2023-12-26 17:03:46 +0000 UTC
