Brightshore Ch1 Pg3 WIP
Added 2022-01-29 18:36:35 +0000 UTCHey ya'll~ Today I have the next peek at Brightshore getting ready to post the inished page tommorrow. Its a little off its time slot sadly but at least its here, Sorry about that. Hope you look forward to meetingthe cast for this piece~
Comments
Lol
Kobi-Tfs
2022-01-30 21:50:29 +0000 UTCI hope that the team has at least one man, it’s nice to have someone unaffected by anything.
Emmitt Cleveland
2022-01-30 06:10:36 +0000 UTCThere should be an apostrophe before the "S" in crews too.
Masao
2022-01-29 20:26:21 +0000 UTCThank you I think Ive fixxed that in post
Kobi-Tfs
2022-01-29 19:35:30 +0000 UTC'Scenarios' and 'together' are misspelled by the way.
phoenix-alpha1
2022-01-29 18:39:52 +0000 UTC
