LIVING IN SIN - Chapter 29, Never Been Kissed
Added 2025-10-22 03:06:00 +0000 UTCHere is the next chapter, plus an illustration from the story. LIS is free, as always, and please let me know how I'm doing. Most of the calls that Scott and Maggie respond to in this tale are strongly based on real incidents I have been a part of. The one in this chapter is no exception.
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The rest of the comment itional level of realism to the story. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing your gift of writing a great story.
Larry
2025-10-27 09:14:14 +0000 UTCThank you so much for writing this book. It has more realism to it than other books of yours I have read. Don't misunderstand but the fact that you are using actual events as part of the story adds an add-
Larry
2025-10-27 09:10:43 +0000 UTCGreat writing! After winning the 2nd set of the first match, you start a paragraph with “The other courts were still in motion when Hannah and Parker started their second set”. Wouldn’t that be either the 3rd set or the 2nd match?
Alle Joeng
2025-10-23 17:02:40 +0000 UTCSometimes justice is just getting through an incident. Our polic have too much to do and the homeless need back in an institution
Robar
2025-10-23 08:25:07 +0000 UTC
