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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 31, Young Lust

This chapter starts with Pa-Ho's POV so if you're not a fan of Pa-Ho, just skip the first scene. You'll miss out on some funny shit like Matt stepping into Pa-Ho's part via the snarky narrator, but you won't lose track of the story. Pa-Ho is just cool to write and he carries much symbolism. If you're not into symbolism, just move to the second scene, which still has Pa-Ho in it, but from Caydee's POV. As always, let me know how I'm doing.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 30, Tech Support

And we return to the music in this chapter. And so begins the push to the end of the novel. As always, let me know how I'm doing.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 29, Family Planning

This will bring the arc of the Kingsley vacation and all of its adventures to full circle. I hope you enjoyed the little offramp. I had fun with it. And now, it's Monday in the story. Back to the grind. Let me know how I did, particularly with the arc of the decompression incident to now.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 28, Paying the Piper

The wrap up of Cabo and moving on toward the final push before the TSF. First, a little more business to take care of. Who wants to party with Matt after reading this one. I do. As always, let me know how I'm doing.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 27, I Might End Up Somewhere in Mexico

This was just a fun chapter to write. I think the characters and the writer both needed a little break like this. It doesn't move the plot forward much, but it also does. That's all I have to say about that. In any case, enjoy and let me know how I did.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 26, Let Me Take You Down

Since I have no LIS to work on anymore, Intemp is all I have. Productivity goes up. Hope no one minds.

When I started the arc of the depressurization emergency, I did not know why I started it. I just knew that something in the writing department of my brain demanded I write the scene and write it right now. And so I did, trusting that I would find out on the journey where this was leading (because I had no fucking idea). It was as I started this chapter that it finally came clear to me. I must have known all the time deep inside because everything just fell perfectly into place. Nothing life-changing, just an arc that is needed before the end of the book. Let me know how you like it. The arc is, by the way, still in progress.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 25, A Tale of Two Stashboxes

Just a little bit about how the Kingsley orbit travels through the galaxy of their universe. There's a few callbacks to earlier scenes here and a little deeper look into Yami's soul, both for you the reader and Yami herself. As always, let me know how I'm doing.

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LIVING IN SIN - Complete Book

For my loyal patrons. Here is the edited and complete version of Living in Sin in Epub form and PDF. Please do not distribute it around. And I'm sure there are still a few errors I missed. No need to point them out. I'm not going to fix them at this point. Enjoy. I also included the photo that will be on the cover.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 24, Release of Pressure

Our friends are reaching the breaking point and Jake declares a vacation for their own mental health. But this is the Kingsleys we're talking about and nothing ever goes as planned. Let me know how I'm doing.

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LIVING IN SIN - Chapter 31 (Final Chapter), On a Dime

And this wraps up book 1 of LIS. Let me know how you liked it, both the chapter and book. I will likely continue the storyline soon. It's up in the air at the moment what I'm actually going to work on for my second story and how I'll publish it. There is also a nice picture of Stacy and Hannah. Not a spoiler, by the way. And SFW unless you work in a place where everyone has a stick up their ass.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 23, You Can't Hide Your Lyin' Eyes

Things are speeding up. Here's a chapter that advances a few plot lines and reintroduces a character we haven't heard from in a while. Also, there's an illustration. SFW. The first is what I wanted to show. The second is a hilarious misunderstanding of my prompt for the picture on the first attempt. I just wanted the other bikes to be a bit smaller than Jake's to match the narrative, but that is what I got. It's so bizzarre, you can't help but laugh. Even those of you who dislike my illustrations should take a look. It'll ease your mind about AI taking over the world.

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LIVING IN SIN - Chapter 30, Still Just a Rat in a Cage

And here's the next installment of Scott and Maggie and the others. Things are moving along. As always, I love to hear feedback on the story. And, as always, LIS if for free.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 22, Caught in a Trap

And here's the next chapter in the saga. A nice dose of Barb and her Barb-isms in this one. Let me know what you think.

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LIVING IN SIN - Chapter 29, Never Been Kissed

Here is the next chapter, plus an illustration from the story. LIS is free, as always, and please let me know how I'm doing. Most of the calls that Scott and Maggie respond to in this tale are strongly based on real incidents I have been a part of. The one in this chapter is no exception.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 21, The Deposed

This was the hardest chapter I've written in quite some time. The first half I wrote in about eight hours. The second half, several days and multiple rewrites and extensive research. I do that to myself sometimes, planning scenes without taking into account how much I need to know in order to write it. Let me know how I did.

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LIVING IN SIN - Chapter 28, Best Served Cold

Here's is the latest chapter of LIS, free as always. Please let me know how it's going. The climax has just played out over these last two chapter. Did I play it well? Did it suck? What's the verdict?

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 20, Get Your Motor Runnin'

Here is the next installment of Intemp. We're ticking down to the Tsunami Sound Festival, but the gang still finds ways to keep themselves amused. As always, let me know how I'm doing. And I posted an illustration of Tater the biker. This is what he looks like in my mind--or at least as close as AI could get there.

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LIVING IN SIN - Chapter 27, When You Pissed All Over My Black Kettle

And, like always, LIS chapters are free. This one contains the scene that everyone has been waiting for. Sorry that no one is being killed or maimed or sent immediately to prison, but this is how such a deal will realistically be resolved. And I would like to thank Herman Wouk for writing the Caine Mutiny and inspiring me with the Captain Queeg testimony scene at the court martial. Those of you familiar with the book will see some parallels. They are intentional.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 19, Get on Your Bad Motor Scooter and Ride

And here we bring the story back to Jake and Campus operations. Kind of. I can't promise this chapter will be as funny as the last, but it was very fun to write and it does move the plot along. Let me know how I'm doing. And, for central coast people, I know there is not really a Harley shop in Atascadero. For legal reasons I had to create my own shop.

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LIVING IN SIN - Chapter 26, The Great Hoard of Plenty

Free, as always, here is the latest in the lives of Scott and Maggie. Let me know how I did.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 18, The Bittersweet Symphony of Life

This rounds out the two chapter arc of Owen's first threesome. It's a good tale that establishes Owen's character (as well as Tif's) a little more but does little to advance the overall plot. Sorry if this bothers you, but I write what won't leave my head and this is one of those things (hippies and the dirty diapers back in Book V is another example). My goal with this arc was to write the most awkward, funny, yet erotic in its realism threesome of all time, adult AND regular literature dating back to the very beginning of human beings using organized writing. Tell me if I came close.

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LIVING IN SIN - Chapter 25, Rally 'round the Family (With a Pocket Full of Shells)

Here is the next chapter of LIS, free as always. I attached a photo from the chapter. It's SFW and is not of a main character, but of someone in this chapter. Not really a spoiler to look at it before reading. You just won't know who he is. As always, let me know what you think. The kids' characters are becoming more important to the tale so they're getting more page time and we're seeing things through their eyes as well.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 17, Thirty Seconds Over SLO

This was a very fun chapter for me as it involves Owen's growth and development as a fully functioning member of the Kingsley and Intemperance inner circle. If you have any doubt about what is going to happen, don't read beyond this point until after you've read the chapter.

YOU'VE BEEN WARNED

Mild spoiler alert. Owen does get his threesome (not exactly news of the world, right? So not too much of a spoiler). My goal from the moment the threesome was first suggested, was a lofty one. I wanted to write the most awkward, yet realistic and still sexy threesome in modern world literature. That means I'm shooting for most awkward, sexy, realistic, and funny of all the threesomes on SOL, Patreon, and Literotica. You be the judge. Based on true events, by the way. And this is the difference between Hollywood and real life thing again. Kind of a theme of mine.

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LIVING IN SIN - Chapter 24, I've Looked At Life From Both Sides Now

Here's the latest chapter of LIS. No charge. From this point on, the kids' ages will be consistent with the canon I posted in my author's note and I will go back and fix the individual chapters to update the references and all that. Until then, please enjoy the latest.

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Author's note on Living in Sin

No charge as this is not a story chapter. What it is is an explanation for how I fucked up the timeline of the kids in LIS and to give a canon timeline for Maggie, Scott, Katie, and Christopher. Full explanation within, as well as some personal stuff about yours truly.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 16, What It Means to be a Man

Here's is the latest chapter. Another one I had a lot of fun writing. It's a little longer than most because I just had a lot to say that couldn't wait until the next chapter, but I trust no one will mind. Let me know your thoughts. And I have an illustration of Laura during one of the scenes. Don't download it if you don't want to see it. And, by downloading it, you forfeit all rights to bitch about how it doesn't look like what you imagine her to look like. And the picture will not spoil the story either.

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LIVING IN SIN - Chapter 23, What My Eyes Have Seen

Here is the next chapter of LIS. Free, as always. This one has some imagery in it that may disturb some readers. Not sex, just life. My eyes have seen it. It is real. That is why it is in this work. Don't eat a sandwich while reading this one.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 15, Playing in the Big Leagues

I had a lot of fun with this chapter, so let me know if you like it. It goes to show that reader feedback helps influence the story. Sometimes you all come up with good ones.

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LIVING IN SIN - Chapter 22, So This is Christmas

Here is the latest chapter of LIS. No charge. Hope everyone likes it.

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INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 14, Tuesday Morning

Here is the next chapter. There's some Pa-Ho in here, so those of you who don't like him can skip over without missing the beat of the story. But you will miss out on some symbolism, which is what Pa-Ho exists for. In any case, I hope you like it. Let me know how I'm doing.

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