INTEMPERANCE X - Chapter 13, They Burned Down the Gambling House
Added 2025-09-04 12:21:13 +0000 UTCThe Kingsley salsa-off comes to pass. And other stuff happens too. Let me know how I'm going, like always.
Comments
I have plans for both of those kids in the next gen stories.
Al Steiner
2025-09-07 11:16:41 +0000 UTCAnother great chapter, Al. Keep them coming! Caydee Kingsley is firmly my 2nd favourite in the Kingsley universe, a very close second to Jake, the main protagonist. What I see is that Caydee is 90% Jake and only 10% Laura, especially her red hair and appearance. She can be deadpan hilarious and is a smart girl. Similarly, Cap will be more Jake than Celia. Great characters that you had created, Al.
Azri Ahmad
2025-09-06 02:48:40 +0000 UTCGreat stuff! Maybe Seth can seek some redemption by letting Jake and Co. know about the Watcher asking him to lie on the stand for money? Looking forward to the next chapter!
Mkrayn
2025-09-05 16:56:21 +0000 UTCHey Al - I have an absolutely silly comment. Been rereading the entire series from the beginning and am in book 8. The silly thing is the naming of Aurora Jill Archer. I have no idea why this is bothering me, but it is described that she is named after Sharon's mother. The thing is that Jews do not name after living relatives - they typically name after a recently deceased relative. Thus no Juniors, etc. Anyway - it is absolutely no big deal, but I thought I'd mention it only for future reference.
Jason C Freedman
2025-09-05 02:57:15 +0000 UTCThis is really getting interesting. Well done as usual!
Gregory Stewart
2025-09-04 23:51:26 +0000 UTC
